olefish Posted November 15, 2011 Report Share Posted November 15, 2011 Author: Crazyfish Olefish Title: Paradise of the Damned Summary: A male whore, Claude just can't get a break, and then he pisses off a mischievous vampire Feedback: Feedback and constructive criticism much appreciated. Fandom: Original Pairing: N/A Warnings: Anal, HJ, M/M, OC, WIP URL:http://original.adul...hp?no=600104563 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
olefish Posted November 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2011 And now with chapter 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
olefish Posted November 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 Chapter 3 up. Woohoo. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
olefish Posted November 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 Here is the whole pitch. Claude runs away from God and into the arms of a demon. Claude just lost his hat and a gambling bet. A client took his arse for free, and his lecherous master has informed him that he should look for new place to live. And when he tried to steal another hat from a stranger, that too ended with no gain. He takes the hint. God wants his redemption and seriousness. The stranger comes by in time to offer him a paradise of fucking and fighting. But at what price to his dark soul? Read here the struggle between the cross and the black in a world strangled with the demands of God and men. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
olefish Posted November 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2011 Chapter four up. As always if you like or dislike it, do say something. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
olefish Posted December 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2011 Woohoo Chapter 5. Read it and salivate. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
olefish Posted January 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 (edited) chapter 7. Well things are heating up for MC. How long does Claude have to live? Guy is pretty is scary. Will Guy fall for Claude and decide not to kill him in the end? Read to find out. Edited January 20, 2012 by olefish Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
olefish Posted January 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2012 editted chapter one again. Ah well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
olefish Posted March 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2012 post chapter 9, Edited chapter 8. Anyway, I keep reading over, I keep seeing place to edit. I can't stop tinkering. Chapter 7 is due for a slight overhaul. Mostly just to move scenes around for maximum impact and more dramatic flow. Really, I can't stop tinkering. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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