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Here is the whole pitch.

Claude runs away from God and into the arms of a demon.

Claude just lost his hat and a gambling bet. A client took his arse for free, and his lecherous master has informed him that he should look for new place to live. And when he tried to steal another hat from a stranger, that too ended with no gain. He takes the hint. God wants his redemption and seriousness. The stranger comes by in time to offer him a paradise of fucking and fighting. But at what price to his dark soul?

Read here the struggle between the cross and the black in a world strangled with the demands of God and men.

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chapter 7. Well things are heating up for MC. How long does Claude have to live? Guy is pretty is scary. Will Guy fall for Claude and decide not to kill him in the end? Read to find out.

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post chapter 9, Edited chapter 8. Anyway, I keep reading over, I keep seeing place to edit. I can't stop tinkering. Chapter 7 is due for a slight overhaul. Mostly just to move scenes around for maximum impact and more dramatic flow. Really, I can't stop tinkering.

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