Phoenix Dawn Posted October 26, 2011 Report Share Posted October 26, 2011 I decided to start a thread to answer any questions reviewers may have about my stories, or concerns they see within the stories. For the story The Mark on the Moon: Sauropod: Thanks for the review! I loved Raven and Elaipha's reunion as well . This story will definitely be epic, and it's actually going to be more than one book, I'm just not sure on how many books there will be altogether. Random critique person: It may seem too soon for them to say they love one another, but they are both reincarnated, and so they are continuing the love they felt for one another thousands of years before, even though they themselves don't know about this. So them saying "I love you" just seems like an impulse. And making love was also on impulse. Rayffel mentioned that everything with Shaelyn just seemed to fit, but he couldn't explain why. That's all I'm giving away for now. There will be many answers later on in the story, have faith! For the story The Marquis Series, Book I: Prelude: dazedandconfused: I'm so glad you like my story! And thanks for the review . To answer your question, yes Cale is Constantine's son. Yeah, Lucifer is crazy but he's awesome . Just don't call him Satan! He hates it to no end . Sadly, Lucifer is not Cale's mother, but you will learn about his mother in chapter 4, i promise! And I'll be sure to check out the story you mentioned as soon as I can . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted October 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2011 The Marquis Series: smint45: Thanks for the review! You'll be able to read about Grim and the staff in the next chapter, I promise! Kyuubifreak: Thanks! I'll hopefully have the next chapter up soon . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted October 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2011 (edited) The Mark on the Moon: SuperfluousMan: I know my writing is not up to par with so many others, but I was mostly worried about people stealing my idea, not about publishing. I guess maybe I should have a beta reader go over it. Edited October 29, 2011 by Phoenix Dawn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted October 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2011 Ok, I am rewriting The Mark on the Moon. I've finally come to realize that when a story becomes more of a chore to write than a joy, it's time to rethink and redo. So, I am going to work on it once again and change it, and most likely I will change it entirely. I'm not sure. Some of you will like the idea, some of you will hate it, but in the end I hope all of you will enjoy at least some part of it. I know Shaelyn is not too happy with me, but then again he never is . I think he's been trying to tell me all along that I was messing up his story, I just wasn't listening (as usual). Now as for my other story, The Marquis Series, I just started that one so it will be awhile before I need to change anything with that one. Hopefully I won't mess that one up as badly as I did with The Mark on the Moon. Again I apologize to my readers. Please bear with me and support me along my fantastical disasters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted November 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 The Marquis reviews: Anihyr Moonstar: Yeah, I love the bantering also . Grim and Constantine don't really hate each other, even though they act like they do . There's more to it than what appears, but we'll just have to find out later, won't we? Mwahahahaha! smint45: I'm glad you like Grim. I like him too . No staff yet, but it will make an appearance soon, I promise! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted November 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 Yeah, sorry the chapters for The Marquis Series are kinda messed up. I'm working on them to make them read better, so that's why chapter 1 is different from the rest. I wanted to get chapter 4 out for the readers and also because it was screaming in my head to be written, so I had to get it out before I lost it. I'm glad a few people enjoy this story. I just hope I can make it better with revision. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted November 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2011 So, chapter one for The Mark on the Moon is finally done. I'm taking the story in a whole new direction this time, so that's why there is a big change to the chapter. I hope you will enjoy it this second time around Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted December 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2011 The Mark on the Moon reviews: @smint45: I'm so glad you like this story too! I have to say that sadly, I like this new version better @nic: I'm glad you have taken an interest in the story. I hope to have chapter 3 done soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 Crosshairs reviews: dazedandconfused: Mwahahahahaha!!!! I like leaving cliffhangers from time to time, but it's usually later in the story. With Crosshairs, for some reason it happened in chapter 1. Did Sinn shoot Rilus? Hmmm.....don't know yet. And yay, story stalker! At least I know I'll have one person reading it . blueskies: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and my writing so far . Yes I know, I left a cliffhanger. My bad . I hope to have chapter 2 done soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted January 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2012 Crosshairs review: Jules Aedin: Thanks for the review! I'm working on chapter 2 now! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted January 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2012 The Mark on the Moon review: miles: I'm glad you like this version too! It took awhile for me to get chapter 3 up because I had to rethink the ENTIRE story line as well as some of the characters. After reading SuperfluousMan's review, I finally realized where my flaws were and why I was getting stuck also. I hope everyone enjoys the new, improved version because I know I do . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted January 13, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2012 The Marquis Series review: smint45: Thanks for the review! Yeah, I figured it was time to introduce the summoning staff. And since he can summon more than demons now, we shall see what he'll summon in this battle . See you next chapter . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted January 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 The Marquis Series review: Gslinger: Thanks for the review! I didn't really intend for it to be so humorous, it just sorta came out that way . I love Lucifer, he's one of my favorite characters . I hope to have the next chapter done soon, so stay tuned! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted January 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2012 Crosshairs review: lividfire: Thanks for the review! I was worried I wouldn't be getting any more for this story. I'm so glad you enjoy it so far ! Just wait until the next chapter, things are gonna get juicy . And I've never heard of the anime you mentioned, I'll have to check it out when I have time to spare . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted January 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2012 Crosshairs review: hitachiintwinlover: Thanks for the review! There's plenty more to come (no pun intended ) in future chapters. As for Prince Rilus, what he is will be revealed, only later on. I'm evil, I know . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted January 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2012 The Mark on the Moon review: oo: Thanks for the review! I actually had planned from the start for Shaelyn to be male/female (or a hermaphrodite) and my readers will see why much later on, unfortunately. For those that read the original version, the Goddess Ryvana was a mega bitch, but I've completely changed her. A few other characters have changed as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted January 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 The Mark on the Moon review: keeeii: Thanks for the review! I intentionally created Shaelyn to be girly. He'll change much, much later on in the story, but for now he'll remain this way. A big event will occur and Shaelyn will no longer be Shaelyn, and that's all I'm saying on that . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted January 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 The Mark on the Moon review: dazedandconfused: Thanks so much for the review, Dazed! I think some readers think he's girly because he tends to cry or get teary a lot. I know that happens to me when I'm in a strange place and feel like an outcast and then girls hate me for no apparent reason. That was the type of life I had growing up and constantly moving to new places. And since he's a hermaphrodite, his female side goes through a menstrual cycle each month, so there's another onslaught with hormones and mood swings. In a sense, Shaelyn is me, and yet he's stronger than me in some areas. But as I said in the previous reply above, he will change drastically much later on. See you next chapter . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted February 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2012 The Marquis Series review: smint45: Thanks for the review! Yeah, Luci is a big kid . We'll see more of his serious side later on. I intended the fight scene to be short, but there will be some that are much longer, I promise! King Paimon is rather pissed that Cale summoned a Roc and ended the fight quickly, so he'll make a return later on as well. Stay tuned! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted April 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2012 The Mark on the Moon review: smint45: Thanks for the review! Maaaaaaybe Ser'k is Shaelyn's destiny, maaaaaybe not. And if so, it might not be in the way everyone hopes. Only me and the Goddess Ryvana know! Mwahahahaha!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted May 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2012 The King's Ruby Heart review: madamoiselleV: Thank you for the review! I honestly didn't expect one with the first chapter, but I appreciate it immensely . I hope to have the next chapter done soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted August 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 (edited) The Mark on the Moon reviews: sabaku lotus: Thanks for the review! We will soon see what the goddess has in store for Shaelyn . ILoveWyatt: Thanks for the review! Hmm....are they ok? We will see in the next chapter . Edited August 8, 2012 by Phoenix Dawn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted August 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 The Marquis Series review: ILoveWyatt: Thanks for the review! I haven't worked on that one in a long while, but I hope to soon . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted August 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2012 The Mark on the Moon reviews: eroburn: Thanks for the review . I know Shaelyn is a bit more feminine than he should be, but there is a reason and we will learn soon enough. His masculine side will start to show more now that Spunk is in the picture . DNight: Thanks for the review! Sorry but Ravsha and Shaelyn are not going to pair up. We will learn the reason in time. I hope to have the next chapter done in a week or so, so stay tuned! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Dawn Posted August 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 26, 2012 The Mark on the Moon reviews: ILoveWyatt: I'm glad you love this story . Squall-sama: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like it so much . This is actually the third rewrite and since I've been working on it for a long time now, I have no plans to give up. So fear not, dear reader, Shaelyn's tale will continue on! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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