moss gypsy Posted July 26, 2011 Report Posted July 26, 2011 (edited) howdy ^^I have a WIP based in Joss Wheadon's Firefly/Serenity 'verse. It mostly involves Jayne Cobb and OC's. I'd love for someone to help me with whatever feedback they would like to contribute (critiques welcome: spelling/grammar, character development, plot development, whatever you have time for). Also, if you speak a foreign language, I'd love to hit you up for translations/notes (i.e. French, Cajun, Chinese).I've introduced five new characters to Serenity's crew--Jayne's former band members--who are hitching a ride to their home planet. So far, there is a lot of drug use. Pairings include but not limited to Jayne/OFC(s), but I have ideas for others as well.Also B-Mod (tats, peircings), SI (as in self-injury), spank, BDsM, voyuerism, graphic drug use...Drop me a line or some reviews if you're interested. Any and all help is greatly appreciated! ^^ You can read the softly titled"Retrovertigo" here: http://tv.adultfanfi...hp?no=600096492Thanks! ^^ Edited January 13, 2013 by space oddity Quote
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