KerantliDreamer Posted April 10, 2011 Report Posted April 10, 2011 As the title says, I need help with this character, main (rather basic) bio is here Name; Female - Amanda Cosgrove Male – Gregory Cosgrove Date of Birth; 3rd April 2088 Age; 22 Star sign; Aries Parents; Sue and James Cosgrove Abilities; Willing able to change into a male Friends; Samantha (Sam), Emily (Em), Joe, Craig Interests; Reading, Dancing, Sports, Computer work, Internet, Shopping, Walking, Woods, Dislikes; Body type; Athletic/thin Clothing Style; Female – Skirts ad strap tops, tights and hoodies Male – Baggy jeans and tees Eye colour; Dark Blue Hair colour/Style; Brown, cut short Race; Reason for change; Natural ability, controlled by a birthstone pendant When Change Started; Age 16, few days after birthday, random trigger However, I'm stuck on a "race" (other than shapeshifter) and wondering if the way her "change" is too "out there" or too Mary-sue-ish. Right now it's rather basic, I know, but its just a small idea that I've had, and want the character to be more developed before I delve into the actual story, and this is my first voyage into this whole area of writing... so yeah, please, Help? Quote
Felineheart Posted April 11, 2011 Report Posted April 11, 2011 Hmm I would think a type of Changling not shapeshifter. Maybe the change is natural because of the need for procreation. Do you have a background story yet. Quote
KerantliDreamer Posted April 11, 2011 Author Report Posted April 11, 2011 I knew she didn't sound right as a shape shifter, as for background story, I'll be going into that in the prologue, when I finally get my brain sorted and running smooth enough to concentrate on stories (and spelling apparently) Quote
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