mikimaro Posted November 15, 2010 Report Posted November 15, 2010 Hi hi~! A long time ago I used to write... a lot. Then I stopped. But recently, I picked it up again, and wrote a not-too-long (10 chapters, plus epilogue) story, and would like someone to give it a look-over. It's an original m/m / yaoi / gay / whatever you want to call it story, and does contain a few sex scenes, some of which are a tiny bit rough, but everything is consentual. So I need a beta who is comfortable with gay sex, or even likes that kind of thing. I'm looking for a beta reader who will, of course, do a basic spelling and grammar check. But even more so, I need someone who can tell me if the story works, if there's anything that needs to be smoothed out, and if it's at all an interesting read. I'm not looking for someone to "rip it to shreads," as some say, but just... you know, make sure it works, and that nothing is awkward or inconsistant or contradictory. The story is complete, so if you, the potential beta, want it in full, or chapter-by-chapter, I can do either. Thanks a bunch! Let's work well together! DemonGoddess 1 Quote
Guest newyorican Posted November 19, 2010 Report Posted November 19, 2010 Could you give a summary about what the actual story is about? Quote
mikimaro Posted November 20, 2010 Author Report Posted November 20, 2010 Could you give a summary about what the actual story is about? Sure thing! It's about a bully at an all-boys boarding school who is given one last chance to shape up or get out. His efforts to stay in the school are helped by two other boys, who each also has his own issues. Is the short version. ^^ Quote
Guest newyorican Posted November 21, 2010 Report Posted November 21, 2010 Sure thing! It's about a bully at an all-boys boarding school who is given one last chance to shape up or get out. His efforts to stay in the school are helped by two other boys, who each also has his own issues. Is the short version. ^^ Oooh, that sounds interesting. If you like, I'd be happy to beta your story. Quote
mikimaro Posted November 21, 2010 Author Report Posted November 21, 2010 Oooh, that sounds interesting. If you like, I'd be happy to beta your story. Ah, thank you so much! Hmm... Can I send you my info via a PM? Quote
Guest newyorican Posted November 21, 2010 Report Posted November 21, 2010 Ah, thank you so much! Hmm... Can I send you my info via a PM? Sure thing. =) I'll let you know if I have any issues concerning it. Quote
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