englishwitch Posted September 24, 2006 Report Share Posted September 24, 2006 Title: Another Dawn, Act I; Setting the Blame Author: Lady_Ochre Rating: Adult++ Summary: I'll kick things off not for myself, but on behalf of a writing partner Lady_Ochre. Lady_ochre has posted an Incredibles fic that is a seqel to Test of the heart, my fic. Another Dawn is a fantastic sequel, which is in no way linked to the one I am writing. Violet is all grown up, married to Tony and have three wonderful children. Vioelt works for a governemtn agency and Tony has a great job of his own. Everything is going well, until a terroist group known as The Dawn rise. The plot is full of twists and turn that will keep you guessing but not confused. The sex scenes are HOT!!! and all the chracters are portrayed wonderfully. Lady_Ochre has my permission to wite a sequel and even took me on as a Beta reader to maintain a level of accuracy to the original. But all in all I had little work to do as Lady_Ochre has put in enough time and effort to create a fic that not only is as good as the original, but leave it lightyears behind. But as the Beta reader I guess I have to leave a good review, so judge for yourself. Feedback: desired Fandom: The Incredibles URL: http://movies.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600090238 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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