Mamacita Posted June 16, 2010 Report Posted June 16, 2010 New Love, 600094129 • disclaimer states not profiting FROM TWILIGHT, doesn't state not profiting FROM STORY warned 6/17/10 The Persistence of Gravity, 600094332 chapter 6 http://books.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...2&chapter=6 • halfway through the chapter there is an ENORMOUS gap of several inches, then one short line, then another multi-inch gap. not sure if that is intended or if you see something weird about it. • disclaimers states not profiting FROM TWILIGHT, doesn't state not profiting FROM STORY warned 6/17/10 Beneath a Shattered Sky, 600094286 • not exactly a whore, but skating close to the line. multiple reminders to review, beginning AND end of every chapter, multiple times... • disclaimers states not profiting FROM TWILIGHT, doesn't state not profiting FROM STORY warned 6/17/10 Love Survives Death, 600094410 • disclaimers states not profiting FROM TWILIGHT, doesn't state not profiting FROM STORY warned 6/17/10 Saving His Soul, 600093877 Noted in Duplicate Stories also posted in AU (where it really should be) as 600094310 • clear review whoring in AN top of ch.4 but only in 600093877 version which should be deleted. this AN was left out of 600094310 so not an issue if --3877 is deleted i guess. Bones, 600094172 • sorry—SHOULD HAVE BEEN NOTED TO MOVE TO CROSSOVERS (crossed with Bones) 'Dysfunction' is a Four-Letter Word, 600093627 • ch.1,2,3,5 stretched Edward's Egg, 600094249 • sorry—SHOULD HAVE BEEN NOTED TO MOVE TO CROSSOVERS (crossed with Dragon Ball Z) The Brother I Never Knew, 600094250 • disclaimers states not profiting FROM TWILIGHT, doesn't state not profiting FROM STORY warned 6/17/10 Polar Night, 600094280 • ch.1,2,3 SQUISHED • ch.14,15,16 STRETCHED The Wolves Den, 600094530 • disclaimers states not profiting FROM TWILIGHT, doesn't state not profiting FROM STORY warned 6/17/10 Losing Time, 600094235 • ch.6 is an author note only, not a chapter, delete warned 6/17/10 Quote
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