jenny_r Posted June 8, 2010 Report Posted June 8, 2010 I have this story "Captive" that I'm working on. I really enjoy writing it but would like more comments, suggestions, etc. I'm open to any kind of feedback, good or bad. Right now I'm working on Chapter 5. It isn't hardcore M/M yet, but as you can probably tell from reading, it's definitely headed full steam in that direction. The greater the buildup the greater the payoff, right? Give it a try. I think you'll like it. Title: Captive Author: trichgirl03 Rating: Adult+ Summary: A boy is taken captive by a lord. The boy is under the impression that he is to be exchanged for another prisoner, but he soon learns that the reasons for his capture and the stipulations of his return are significantly more complicated. Warnings: Anal, Angst, H/C, M/M, Minor- Minor involved (Under legal age for sex), Oral, Rom, UST, Violence, WIP Feedback: Awesome! Reviews are the greatest inspiration to keep writing Fandom: Original URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600102153 Thanks in advance for reading! Quote
jenny_r Posted July 26, 2010 Author Report Posted July 26, 2010 (edited) Chapter 9 is now up. The physical relationship starts in that chapter, but the emotional relationship started long before that. Edited July 26, 2010 by trichgirl03 Quote
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