quamp Posted August 9, 2006 Report Posted August 9, 2006 O.k., I'm writing a story about a Japanese schoolgirl caught in a love hexagon where she has a bunch of guys competing for her. She is from a faily which produces women legenday in the kitchen and with cleaning. However, she's very clumsy and can't boil water to save her life. Valentine's day is approaching in the story. Should I have her have a family member make a chocolate heart for her, which the guys fight over, gets crushed & ruined or have her come to school that day with no chocolate at all? It will either be she decides two days before or she won't have made her decision. Quote
Guest arichang Posted August 17, 2006 Report Posted August 17, 2006 well. it sounds as if the whole "ask a family member to make the chocolate" thing is more interesting... what would happen if she went chocolate-less? Quote
quamp Posted August 17, 2006 Author Report Posted August 17, 2006 Basically the guys would end up fighting anyway. Btw, I've finished the story, and it's up now. It is called The Miyabi Chronicles. Quote
Guest SilverFox-chan Posted October 24, 2006 Report Posted October 24, 2006 I say go with no chocolate at all. Quote
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