lightstep Posted May 27, 2010 Report Share Posted May 27, 2010 Title: The Last Five Minutes Author: Fox Lightstep Rating: Thus far: 3/5 Summary: Five years after Sozin's comet, Zuko has successfully ended the war and reduced Ozai's followers to merely small bands dotting the globe. At a celebration, the gAang reunite. Time has changed the children into adults and Zuko finds himself in an interesting predicament. Will the Fire Nation accept his choice for a wife? Will the child be safe under the wing of the Nobles, or would it be safer out of the Nations and into the cold embrace of the Water Tribes? Feedback: I'm not much of a writer. All my life I've preferred to draw than to write. As I write the story, I constantly refer to my dictionary and thesaurus as I find myself using the same words over and over. Hopefully the repeats will diminish as chapters go on. I do enjoy to pay attention to detail. It's the artist in me. Though I know I'm not the best, I try my hardest at what I like to do. I know that there will be errors. I've edited my first chapter at least three times now and have edited it twice thus far. As I state in my AN on Chapter one and throughout the AN's for the other chapters; my story is purely based on "what if..." coincidences. I do ask that the reader keep in mind I've based this on a fifth year anniversary after the Comet, as I know that some of my ideas are a little odd. Even though there's only two chapters posted, I do have up to chapter five written and saved on my computer. I have gone back to fix them as I need to and before they're posted as the next installment, I read them over and make sure that they're as ready as they can be. Please do enjoy. Fandom: Avatar: The Last Airbender. Zuko X Katara pairing URL: http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600092599 Feel free to leave a review if there's questions. Of course feedback from readers is always nice. Thanks for reading and giving my post and story a consideration. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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