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Guest AmazingEnthusiasto
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Title: Pins and Needles

Author: Enthusiasto

Rating: Adult++

Summary: Hi!

I have a fic that should probably fall under "books," but I'm putting it in the "movie" category because I based it on the movie version.

It's "The Island of Dr. Moreau," the 1996 crapfest, starring Marlon Brando, Val Kilmer, David Thewlis, and Fairuza Balk.

I've attempted a F/M/M slashy threesome thingy, and it's only on the third chapter (but heating up.)

Feedback: desired

Fandom: Island of Dr. Moreau

URL: http://movies.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600005376

  • 2 months later...
Guest Wickedswanz
Posted

I read and reviewed your story. It was pretty good, just a little more detail maybe. KEEP WRITING smile.gif

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