Mamacita Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 BUFFY / THREESOMES / ROOT — Angel/Buffy/Spike pp.1-2 Remember me 544171073 —this story is kind of a mess. the author states that she had to re-register under a different name (presumably this one, <Brat8>. each pull-down menu item in this story contains multiple chapters and they are out of order. she must have deleted and then reposted Chs 1-21 as they start halfway down the menu; then she started over again with 20 and went thru the end. in the process seems to have skipped Chs 7-8. Menu 17 is listed as Chs. 7-8 but is really a repeat of menu 16, which really is Chs 5-6. so i don’t know if you want to contact the author to get chapters 7-8 out of her or what but they are missing. this thing with the messed-up and missing chapters is mentioned by multiple reviewers. Choices 26940 —according to reviewers, chapter billed as #23 is really a repeat of #22 although in the second iteration (menu 24) it has a “chapter twenty-three” header on it. also, one reviewer states “seem to be chapters missing in this fic...lots of them” but i don’t see any missing except #23. Menu 1 — • SpikeShe She • waspingping • She ded ded • Gentl rea reached • huch uch Menu 2 — • ceg fog for • abour lor loss • the entsents • face,kingking • head oursours?” • her,ans ans • didndidn’t Menu 3 — • at, co, coldness • he mhe movies • Spmilemiled • And wha ass ass Menu 4 — • with exen. Hn. He • all all over • it was disrd.”d.” • he heer ier in • wiped themy any and • kiss he che cheek • was touctouchy Menu 5 — • the cng, ng, at • best yst yet • theyme tme to • inspion son struck • she she reached • her chesd did disappeared • sng ang at it Menu 6 — • “ou hou have • on here. e. • pikepike scowled Menu 7 — • soing ing Menu 8 — • hoom oom and Menu 9 — • “finhatehatever • as hood,ood, • gre great • That fun.fun • panten hen he Menu 10 — • mathe whe was • tyou you had • years I a I am an • thhe ohe only • showiher her Menu 11 — • thereall all • ove ave a • say,be nbe not • ite ree really Menu 12 — • ffy,ffy, we • up untils pospoint • You? Th? That’s • ovedoved • dienceence • she hven ven more Menu 13 — • tanglangled • clenchishe she was • m jum just • is concd, wd, we’ll Menu 15 — • sheghedghed • wasrelarelax Menu 16 — • loim. im. • hane gen going • wasn’ sur sure Menu 17 — • roomes tes that Menu 18 — • bgettgetting • asked, lng ang Menu 19 — • a Ang Angel • surprito fto find • all all together • shiverrun run • awaye loe looked • aga his his • everything.he khe • like t She She Menu 20 • Abort, t! [para] t! • ahrughrugged • foursours since • Anwerewere • welcomy, y, • frngelngel • WhatWhat now • reawhy why • therforefore • the shor. Tr. The • shook her [para] Oh [para] Oh god, Menu 21 — • hetiontions • menallyllowllow Menu 22 — • Bufouldouldn’t • I nto tto tell Menu 23 — • you fio figure • tellingthatthat • herselady ady • exees tes to Menu 24 — • Godfeelfeel • therthere • Putther her Menu 25 — • [in end AN] mean t evi evil Menu 26 — • “I k”I know Menu 27 — • burs opoe open • Did kno know • Sort Liv Living Menu 28 — • eacher.her. • you you were • as if I hall tll the • out out for Menu 30 — • lig light Menu 31 — • isays ays there • don’nt tnt to The tale to the noir 31327 Ch 1 — • to dea death • looon ton the • whisp her her • tightenee voe volume Ch 2 — • and was was • wefinefinitively • w led led to • gafunnfunny • kly,kly, she didn’t wasntbegibegin • wn’t n’t have Ch 3 — • surellm dlm down • of coudarldarling • blankets,ing ing • thght,ght, • ot tot that • Buffyouthouth • taxioyceoyce • dt tht they • maybe longlong • s the the knife • obs the the • ttoo too tight • thhrouhrough • reone,one • wellm vem very • wh’m t’m • I am. sai said Ch 4 — • Soonl fil fight • Buffarlyarly • yon’t n’t like • You’lrealready • heisteisted • fabriuldeulded • skin.ck sck silk • Shut She She • him,ing ing • Souldouldn’t Ch 5 — • not so . 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You’re • youryour • Ane ise is • he dhe didn’t • friefriend’s • evedeved it • thght.ght. • game-f and and he • up up at that • heetheeth • Angelusrcasrcastic • Dahe mhe must • wrecyouryour • I’l I’ll kill Ch 6 — • Scourg Eur Europe • B cou coulearlearly • loose hYou YTou ... befectfect • wid wide and • Sppullpulled • morosedosed • StaHe eHe • shoeshoes • shuldnuldn’t • mustoy hoy him Ch 7 — • in herroomroom • onleonless • thertbertbeat • et aet away • Relax.l cal call • themes ies in • lonack ack curls • readon’don’t • We lin oin our • his his demon • vam’s; ‘s; Ch 8 — • andt ext expect • lus lus had • who wn hen her • weow aow at • togr, fr, • i’re ‘re • dripppherpheromones • oe foe forehead • sandsandth • cctedcted Ch 9 — • sthed hed his • red, ld, looking • Tcho cho • herthe the • respresponsibility • roar,la pla pushed • skirter, lr, looking • to loo him him • saw saw her Ch 10 — • the Sla [drops off] R [para] Regarding • wisach ach • someonu’veu’ve • leruisruises • probablyfer..fer...and Ch 11 — • takinr str stake Getting his rocks back 35306 Ch 1 — • What H I w I wasn’t • I’m t of of this • Buu’reu’re Ch 2 — • aorciorcing • It wIt was if Ch 3 — • moxcruxcruciating • Iieveieved it • afternwalkwalk • chathatthat • comewlinwling The games people play 29169 Ch 1 — • leely ely Late 23774 • hig heg her • He He told The boarder 22552 Ch 1 — • to pla plate Ch 4 — • with the e. He. He Ch 8 — • to to William’s Lovers 12376 Ch 1 — • wronwrong • wics res really Ch 2 — • hadn trn trying Ch 3 — • th he he was • themSleeSleep Mute 10734 • if if marking • I’m I’m not done Body shots 7316 • Siuck.uck Taming the beasts 3873 Ch 2 — • hang be him him • “My”My god Ch 4 — • toge in in a Ch 5 — • Bus hes head Ch 6 — • tears he wel welling • flowedy. y. Ch 7 — • nearnearly • her imi imitation • as his his mouth • thais sis • ouldould Breaking a slayer 2056 doing this story separately as it’s 2003 and 50 chapters so i anticipate a lot of wordord Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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