wordord and chapter ordering problems

[Mamacita]

BUFFY / THREESOMES / ROOT — Angel/Buffy/Spike pp.1-2

Remember me 544171073

—this story is kind of a mess. the author states that she had to re-register under a different name (presumably this one, <Brat8>. each pull-down menu item in this story contains multiple chapters and they are out of order. she must have deleted and then reposted Chs 1-21 as they start halfway down the menu; then she started over again with 20 and went thru the end. in the process seems to have skipped Chs 7-8. Menu 17 is listed as Chs. 7-8 but is really a repeat of menu 16, which really is Chs 5-6. so i don’t know if you want to contact the author to get chapters 7-8 out of her or what but they are missing. this thing with the messed-up and missing chapters is mentioned by multiple reviewers.

Choices 26940

—according to reviewers, chapter billed as #23 is really a repeat of #22 although in the second iteration (menu 24) it has a “chapter twenty-three” header on it. also, one reviewer states “seem to be chapters missing in this fic...lots of them” but i don’t see any missing except #23.

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• whisp her her

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• Relax.l cal call

• themes ies in

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• I’m t of of this

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Ch 2 — • aorciorcing

• It wIt was if

Ch 3 — • moxcruxcruciating

• Iieveieved it

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• chathatthat

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The games people play 29169

Ch 1 — • leely ely

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• hig heg her

• He He told

The boarder 22552

Ch 1 — • to pla plate

Ch 4 — • with the e. He. He

Ch 8 — • to to William’s

Lovers 12376

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Mute 10734

• if if marking

• I’m I’m not done

Body shots 7316

• Siuck.uck

Taming the beasts 3873

Ch 2 — • hang be him him

• “My”My god

Ch 4 — • toge in in a

Ch 5 — • Bus hes head

Ch 6 — • tears he wel welling

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• her imi imitation

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Breaking a slayer 2056

doing this story separately as it’s 2003 and 50 chapters so i anticipate a lot of wordord