Mamacita Posted October 8, 2009 Report Posted October 8, 2009 BUFFY / THREESOMES / ROOT — p.6 Even Dirtier Girls 35087 (this is the one i checked for glitches) Ch 1 — • Christ’ke...”ke...” • You’veten ten • Steadyinrselrself • herivarival • finafinally • subvertedffy ffy • in pleasand and • sidn’idn’t • thme tme thing Ch 2 — just an AN, not a chapter apologizing for the AFF glitches. Delete? Triptych 544171766 —not sure where to put this notice so i’m putting it here. there’s no warning of a character death, should possibly be added; a reviewer complained that she was not warned and would like to have been and it IS on the list of warnings they can pick from Aftermath of an encounter with an undead legend 35299 • in in the first The london sonnets 31785 Ch 2 — • could the the lure Ch 3 — • t irt irony? • His [para] His voice became • won’t kil.” [para] .” Ch 4 — • the the air • slick ick into Ch 7 — • you are the who who • pul him him Menu 8 — • ”If [para] “If Rupert can —starting with ch.8, the chapters are misnumbered in the pull-down menu and the story text. 8 is numbered as 9 but SHOULD BE 8, and so on thru the end Menu 9 — • dng, ng, but • rt’srt’s • feelingsld fld favor • She ld atd at him • urazirazing Menu 10 — • Go nd tnd try Menu 11 — • etteette Menu 13 — • woulwouldn’t • was was another • thr the them • attentionhat hat was • aga Rup Rupert • wasresiresisting? • jey. ey. • incrity.ity. • take car you you • along Ets nes neck • sharp off off • noyingying • whathat?hat?” • to wap. [para] p. [para] “Women • clouded . “Y, “Yes, • admi out out loud Three's cumpany: fun in the sun 32185 • brieflym thm the • theirfriefriends • mom movo Ito Italy • dingding and • hummgaingainst • heir oir over • befrealrealizing Three's cumpany 31924 • haz hazel eyes • vto pto pull Quote
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