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BUFFY / THREESOMES / ROOT p.12

And dawn makes three 1872

—In p.12 story summary: back in Buffy’fe afe and

• licking gir girls

• Faith’s aeganegan

• tossed thn thn the

• peroungoung

• caressinem oem

• and slhem hem

• naand and

The jacket 1295

IN STORY

—something is wrong with the apostrophes, they all print as lowercase L’s

• so mtroutrouble

• Buffy ind.” [para] d.”

• es tes turned

Vacancy 1247

• orriorrible

• mattmatter

• don’t Wh What

• lefmplempletely empty

Watch out slayer! 1188

Ch 2

• [in top line of start-up AN] Fatchatch Out ... should be Watch Out

• lon hon hers

My boy 546

• bit E on on the

Sated 119

—REVIEWERS mention that all chapters cut off abruptly, and it appears author has never fixed them as they all break off in the middle of words. not sure if this is glitch-related or if something else happened

Ch 1

• that was end end

• mus tos to

• seemed t on on and on

• apart, th, the

• get get the best

• omfoomfortable

• herst. st.

• yock Fck Faith

• exquisiiss.iss.

• He h she she

• and and she

• a secoJustJust

• juove ove

• ra tha than the

• the fof tof the

• “Yyou you are

• All problcancan’t

• monyou you

• di dow down

• erpenipenis

• oveandeander

• mitalktalk

• effeeffect

• Eveing ing

• her h tak taking

• theyld hld have

• ag the they

• jurisdictiorresrresting

• and re-asmentment

Ch 2

• [in AN2] NC-1cs, cs

• poutedle sle smiling

• the the first

• handningning

• Get oto hto here

• stu stupid

• ano guy guy

• upsingsing

• face a of of

• soft and innoc [cuts off]

Ch 3

• tensSpikSpike

• gave me. ‘s a’s all he

• atedated

• t som something

• tor to make

• rhythsurgsurge

• Thenguengue-wrestled

Ch 4

• [in starting AN, Spoilers] • Xanand and Buffy

• take ssagssage

• earone one colors [earthtone colors]

• offroomroom

• eyeidiniding

• diHe dHe didn’t

• With my sou [para] “ [para] “That’s good

• hisy moy mouth

• breathwingwing

• rol roles

• witnessa tra train

• kneadthemthem

• softeoftened

• to w she she

• makes sos so good

• FaitFaith’s

• eyesw onw only

Ch 5

—i think she put in manual line endings as the lines are all fairly short and don’t change width with the browser being widened

• nap her her neck

• vampireile ile

• at at her

• you aour our

• knoy. “y. “Thanks

• slomachmachine

• are rigged.re are are

Improvised 10

IN STORY

• thoke oke

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