Mamacita Posted October 6, 2009 Report Posted October 6, 2009 BUFFY / THREESOMES / ROOT p.12 And dawn makes three 1872 —In p.12 story summary: back in Buffy’fe afe and • licking gir girls • Faith’s aeganegan • tossed thn thn the • peroungoung • caressinem oem • and slhem hem • naand and The jacket 1295 IN STORY —something is wrong with the apostrophes, they all print as lowercase L’s • so mtroutrouble • Buffy ind.” [para] d.” • es tes turned Vacancy 1247 • orriorrible • mattmatter • don’t Wh What • lefmplempletely empty Watch out slayer! 1188 Ch 2 • [in top line of start-up AN] Fatchatch Out ... should be Watch Out • lon hon hers My boy 546 • bit E on on the Sated 119 —REVIEWERS mention that all chapters cut off abruptly, and it appears author has never fixed them as they all break off in the middle of words. not sure if this is glitch-related or if something else happened Ch 1 • that was end end • mus tos to • seemed t on on and on • apart, th, the • get get the best • omfoomfortable • herst. st. • yock Fck Faith • exquisiiss.iss. • He h she she • and and she • a secoJustJust • juove ove • ra tha than the • the fof tof the • “Yyou you are • All problcancan’t • monyou you • di dow down • erpenipenis • oveandeander • mitalktalk • effeeffect • Eveing ing • her h tak taking • theyld hld have • ag the they • jurisdictiorresrresting • and re-asmentment Ch 2 • [in AN2] NC-1cs, cs • poutedle sle smiling • the the first • handningning • Get oto hto here • stu stupid • ano guy guy • upsingsing • face a of of • soft and innoc [cuts off] Ch 3 • tensSpikSpike • gave me. ‘s a’s all he • atedated • t som something • tor to make • rhythsurgsurge • Thenguengue-wrestled Ch 4 • [in starting AN, Spoilers] • Xanand and Buffy • take ssagssage • earone one colors [earthtone colors] • offroomroom • eyeidiniding • diHe dHe didn’t • With my sou [para] “ [para] “That’s good • hisy moy mouth • breathwingwing • rol roles • witnessa tra train • kneadthemthem • softeoftened • to w she she • makes sos so good • FaitFaith’s • eyesw onw only Ch 5 —i think she put in manual line endings as the lines are all fairly short and don’t change width with the browser being widened • nap her her neck • vampireile ile • at at her • you aour our • knoy. “y. “Thanks • slomachmachine • are rigged.re are are Improvised 10 IN STORY • thoke oke Quote
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