no wordord, but other weirdies

[Mamacita]

Hold me thrill me kiss me kill me 544188153

Ch 50

—an AN, not a chapter

Sweet dreams 544215370

—no wordord, but it’s kind of odd: some sections have hard line endings on them, interspersed with sections that only have hard returns at the end of paragraphs. so some really short lines and some stretchable ones. odd. but not really a glitch.

Blacklust: demon hunter 544213945

Ch 1

—not a chapter, just a very long batch of extra disclaimers

Your bloody fault...is not...is too 544207145

—just realized due to a reviewer’s mention of it that the link this author LitGal (ID 1296767597) puts in most of her stories at the top as another place they can be found does not work. don’t know if you bother mentioning that to them; everything of AFF’s seems to be working OK

Ch 1

—this is really strange. about 8 pages in [search for high-tail it out of town] the author begins starting every line with a series of tildes (~) to indent them. apparently it’s supposed to indicate that this is where angel is relating a story but it looks really stupid. i suppose fixing it would be considered beta-ing but it would have been nice if it was just in italics or something. yeesh!