Mamacita Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT — p.21 The future is what we make 5024 — reviewer states "AFF has eaten the end (actually prob ¾ or more) of chapter 8 cont (menu 13)—?? i can’t tell, but a second reviewer says something about “what happened to chapter 8” and notes that it’s different from where it was posted elsewhere. if there’s something missing the au will probably have to fix it, sounds like a large chunk. Menu 1 • quitehilehile • havingfirmfirmly • jokes,uffyuffy • under their proton. [para] on. • smile arynaryn • Xandeokedoked Menu 2 • FLASHBACK FLASHBACK [i suspect only one is intended] • litey toy to • wasn’t g to to leave • horror thas sas swiftly • led led the rage • with a y smy smile • like Buffe sme smiled • she mred red • fondernder • Thereno wno way • tiny hanseeiseeing • Sob [para] Sobbing for breath, • stared bac her her • laughed inglingly • of pe coe coming Menu 3 • picked upce’ce’s • final to bto break • Costopstopped Menu 4 • with spersperate cry • anuff.uff. 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Menu 14 • sie ine in the • amongans ans • andans,ans wrapped • sng gng gently • hiss, “s, “Are you • betteptaiptain • hitenttention • liquilverlver • seeautoautomatically • hisghteghter • slowly cing ing eyes • swe sweet heated • discretely d tod to • cled,led • as wes fas fact • ...bu [para] ...but did he • Grag Xag Xander • turning e ine in the • finareverevealed • spasming she [drops off] • obduddeuddering • him bla blank • continuingenceence • moorriorries • serioudnesdness of this id”But”But • his sto hea heaved • grim. O. Obviously • definitely a him him • sundednded by • low perspers of pain • Aainfainfully • cast the es aes • You’re neal.eal • becamversvers • als frs friends • had to do witmQ§ m [drops off] Menu 15 • stepped hestly tly • drentrent choices • closis eis eyes • moans fillee roe room • stag meg me • wasn’tn a n a hint • leg itly.tly • felt like throwup. 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