wordord and 2 possible minors

[Mamacita]

BUFFY / SLASH / ANGEL(US)/XANDER — p.1 of 1

I won't let anything happen to you 600031127

—OMG! the entire chapter is CENTERED! how very annoying. and every 2 lines there is a double space? WHY?

—okay. i seriously have to wonder how old this author is. really. they don’t have a clue about capitalization, punctuation, i mean it’s beyond bad. it has a very juvenile feel to it. could you just check their supposed DOB maybe, just in case?

Just a bit bent 544197390

—Author’s profile states “Hi, I’m a teenager who...” Any way to get the actual DOB? And good grief, even if she’s 19, if she’s “been an avid reader of slash (for over eight years now)” that means...since she was 11? Good gawd!

Dark kisses 27116

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• relashipships

The scarlet letter 13751

Ch 1

• eliaelia

Ch 2

• thechercher

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Ch 3

• hamburge goo good

• his dr bir

Ch 4

• reservoir [para] W [para] When stray

Ch 5

• smashingindoindow

• tenderness,ng tng this

• upset here tre than

• bac back!

Ch 6

• the iresires had

• blacblack magic

• yo pre prefer

• rea really

• Break the the

• situsituation

• owhilwhile

• pro eac each

• d’t k’t know

Ch 8

• tiny littlewn cwn car

• as lid lid down

• No’s n’s not

• Whichuthfuthfully

• to the nd. [para] nd.

Ch 9

• m? m? No,

• “Mother [para] “T [para] “Time

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Ch 10

• glart hit him

• I’ell ell her

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• wegoingoing

• shakiis his head

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• kno know her

Ch 11

• “Sto”Stop it

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• Xanup aup as

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Ch 12

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Ch 13

• Cordelia n. n.

• recr it it and

Love, lies and regrets 12852

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I'll never love you 2364

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