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[Mamacita]

BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.27

By the doubling of our joy and the... 544195399

—for some reason the preliminary info at the beginning of the story is stated twice; but in each section different parts got left out of the Notes. don’t know if you want to leave it alone or fix it.

Once it begins 23805

—general comment: this author is one of the worst spellers i’ve ever seen. half the time it’s pretty hard to tell if something is a glitch or just her crappy attempt at spelling.

IN REVIEWS

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• by jamie, 193328: actually b. I . I can’t

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• by Hyperbole, 199657: happypy Apy Angel

IN STORY

Ch 1

• nothingdo fdo for

• Xander. I” S” She

• to serou? ou?

• nternterrupted

Ch 2

• oanioaning

Ch 3

• [in AN] it’s my story - dea [should be “deal with it” i think]

• [remove first] 03

—so, this is very weird. in this whole chapter, the opening quotes whenever someone speaks is an odd special character of some kind, the quotes are at “ground level” instead of “up high”. i don’t know if you can do a search & replace or what—not sure what that character is. (i beta for a polish gal who uses them and it drives me crazy!)

• Corringringing

• invisivision

• h Sur Surpresses

• when uns uns in

Ch 4

• ‘t l’t like it?

• “’t l’t lose you

• opening OpenOpening

• Angel barkd led lets

• emotioweigweight

Ch 5

• it’svingving

• his o chi childe’s

• tdon’ don’t know

• his h as as good

• turnedris?ris?”

• e doe doesn’t

• lifts headhead.

Ch 6

• nearly hes hes her

• for himsel [para] “H [para] “How...”

• sobs nst nst his

Ch 7

—again with the weird quote marks in this chapter (just the very first one)

• calls to to his

• Come and get . [para] .

• affe by by that

• tell...y toy to...

• If he ehad had a

• comple wit without

• broodsionsion

• destroyechaichained

• De scr scramble

• Spikdisadisappointment

Ch 8

• arm s aro around

• himselfwer,wer

• hreatreath he

• able to ain ain his

• unheal [para] “ [para] “I really

• Yesgel’gel’s car

Ch 9

• nst nst the back

• Dissed,sed,

• of thf the shop

Ch 10

• sorry maout out that

• he hto cto come

Ch 13

—again, the strange down-low quote marks in this chapter—just the first one again

Chronos' puppet 14226

Ch 1

• [in AN] to ge don done

• for for his own

• Tfissfissures

• was was not the

• whel the the

• evhinghing

Ch 4

• the sses ses of time

• like An And

Ch 5

• the croas tas

• woras aas abruptly

Ch 6

• this awas a

• of teet ant any

• goingoing home

• thondeonde

Ch 7

• smearedinstinst

• domina Co Cowed

Ch 8

• to the the slackened

Ch 15

—not a chapter, just an AN