Mamacita Posted August 6, 2009 Report Posted August 6, 2009 BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.27 By the doubling of our joy and the... 544195399 —for some reason the preliminary info at the beginning of the story is stated twice; but in each section different parts got left out of the Notes. don’t know if you want to leave it alone or fix it. Once it begins 23805 —general comment: this author is one of the worst spellers i’ve ever seen. half the time it’s pretty hard to tell if something is a glitch or just her crappy attempt at spelling. IN REVIEWS Page 2 • by jamie, 193328: actually b. I . I can’t Page 3 • by Hyperbole, 199657: happypy Apy Angel IN STORY Ch 1 • nothingdo fdo for • Xander. I” S” She • to serou? ou? • nternterrupted Ch 2 • oanioaning Ch 3 • [in AN] it’s my story - dea [should be “deal with it” i think] • [remove first] 03 —so, this is very weird. in this whole chapter, the opening quotes whenever someone speaks is an odd special character of some kind, the quotes are at “ground level” instead of “up high”. i don’t know if you can do a search & replace or what—not sure what that character is. (i beta for a polish gal who uses them and it drives me crazy!) • Corringringing • invisivision • h Sur Surpresses • when uns uns in Ch 4 • ‘t l’t like it? • “’t l’t lose you • opening OpenOpening • Angel barkd led lets • emotioweigweight Ch 5 • it’svingving • his o chi childe’s • tdon’ don’t know • his h as as good • turnedris?ris?” • e doe doesn’t • lifts headhead. Ch 6 • nearly hes hes her • for himsel [para] “H [para] “How...” • sobs nst nst his Ch 7 —again with the weird quote marks in this chapter (just the very first one) • calls to to his • Come and get . [para] . • affe by by that • tell...y toy to... • If he ehad had a • comple wit without • broodsionsion • destroyechaichained • De scr scramble • Spikdisadisappointment Ch 8 • arm s aro around • himselfwer,wer • hreatreath he • able to ain ain his • unheal [para] “ [para] “I really • Yesgel’gel’s car Ch 9 • nst nst the back • Dissed,sed, • of thf the shop Ch 10 • sorry maout out that • he hto cto come Ch 13 —again, the strange down-low quote marks in this chapter—just the first one again Chronos' puppet 14226 Ch 1 • [in AN] to ge don done • for for his own • Tfissfissures • was was not the • whel the the • evhinghing Ch 4 • the sses ses of time • like An And Ch 5 • the croas tas • woras aas abruptly Ch 6 • this awas a • of teet ant any • goingoing home • thondeonde Ch 7 • smearedinstinst • domina Co Cowed Ch 8 • to the the slackened Ch 15 —not a chapter, just an AN Quote
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