wordord and other wonders

[Mamacita]

BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.28

Saying hello 544192822

—Ch 2 is not a chapter but an extended AN

Lost and forgoten series 544191415

—Ch 5 is not a chapter but an AN and request for a beta

Fade 25230

IN REVIEWS

Page 1

• by katie_k, 193870: wfor for the

• by mel, 194119: ‘t ‘t see that ... thisthis pairing

Page 2

• by Rhonda, 194490: Noat Iat I’ve

• by Kay, 195061: and the pags, gs, and

• by Spikefan, 195069: I ct wat wait

Page 3

• by Rhonda, 198403: wit hit him

Page 5

• by mel, 224897: I’sseissed you

Page 6

• by mel, 229743: rev(the(the site

• tgod god that

IN STORY

—Chapter 1 is at the end of the story and should be at the beginning. I noticed in the reviews that there was mention of chapter 1 “cutting off after you’d written hardly anything”, and I think the author tried to go back and replace the text but ended up somehow getting it out of order at the end. I think it probably was intended to go at the beginning (well, it’s chapter 1!) as the disclaimer is in ch.1. One review suggests that this placement was deliberate, but it doesn’t appear so.

Menu 1 (Ch 2)

• Hngrangraceful

• oved ved an

• ande hde his

• his to tto the

• his hauncto rto

• inb a mt.” t.”

• hear he he shut

Menu 2 (Ch 3, etc.)

—Beginning and ending AN usually in bold with this author but after opening AN she didn’t close her tag properly and entire chapter is in bold.

• slo slowly

• boy boy all too

• tried ull ull

• didthinthink

Menu 3

• backish,ish,

Menu 4

• woundseatseated

• haven abn able

Menu 5

• Undeterresleesley

• fteartears

• cellP> P>

• Darlamoremore

• tightighter

Menu 7

• thougf Vaf Valley

• was ted ted to

Menu 8

• at ei Rup Rupert

• Williagringrin

• hom home

• Heeen een

• to wWillWilliam

• and h knh knew

Menu 9

• musiarinaring

• tmselmself

• &For For the

Menu 10

• have a a normal

Fangless and the whelp 16273

IN REVIEWS

• by Becky, 106822: still laug now now

• by Godiva, 278919: and ng fng fun