Mamacita Posted August 5, 2009 Report Posted August 5, 2009 BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.28 Saying hello 544192822 —Ch 2 is not a chapter but an extended AN Lost and forgoten series 544191415 —Ch 5 is not a chapter but an AN and request for a beta Fade 25230 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • by katie_k, 193870: wfor for the • by mel, 194119: ‘t ‘t see that ... thisthis pairing Page 2 • by Rhonda, 194490: Noat Iat I’ve • by Kay, 195061: and the pags, gs, and • by Spikefan, 195069: I ct wat wait Page 3 • by Rhonda, 198403: wit hit him Page 5 • by mel, 224897: I’sseissed you Page 6 • by mel, 229743: rev(the(the site • tgod god that IN STORY —Chapter 1 is at the end of the story and should be at the beginning. I noticed in the reviews that there was mention of chapter 1 “cutting off after you’d written hardly anything”, and I think the author tried to go back and replace the text but ended up somehow getting it out of order at the end. I think it probably was intended to go at the beginning (well, it’s chapter 1!) as the disclaimer is in ch.1. One review suggests that this placement was deliberate, but it doesn’t appear so. Menu 1 (Ch 2) • Hngrangraceful • oved ved an • ande hde his • his to tto the • his hauncto rto • inb a mt.” t.” • hear he he shut Menu 2 (Ch 3, etc.) —Beginning and ending AN usually in bold with this author but after opening AN she didn’t close her tag properly and entire chapter is in bold. • slo slowly • boy boy all too • tried ull ull • didthinthink Menu 3 • backish,ish, Menu 4 • woundseatseated • haven abn able Menu 5 • Undeterresleesley • fteartears • cellP> P> • Darlamoremore • tightighter Menu 7 • thougf Vaf Valley • was ted ted to Menu 8 • at ei Rup Rupert • Williagringrin • hom home • Heeen een • to wWillWilliam • and h knh knew Menu 9 • musiarinaring • tmselmself • &For For the Menu 10 • have a a normal Fangless and the whelp 16273 IN REVIEWS • by Becky, 106822: still laug now now • by Godiva, 278919: and ng fng fun Quote
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