Mamacita Posted June 15, 2009 Report Posted June 15, 2009 GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 28 Losing it (ID 17715) In reviews (is it expecting too much for them to be coherent here? yeesh! i guess so) Page 1 • by Diva (ID 118880): to see anotherh cha thi this am Page 3 • by Jane (ID 134231): I love the wou aou are making • ditto: because a little bitthe the waiting Page 4 • by spiked (ID 147673): lets have an upd yo you’re Page 5 • response by au, Kye (ID 155699): hope I won’t disant ant anyone Page 6 • by lele angel03 (ID 195350): bexause se no no sex its Page 8 • by lele angel03 (ID 220526): love it..alwayvingving it Page 9 • by lele angel03 (hmmm!) (ID 258840): in it like hoere ere relationship Page 10 • by toria (ID 289664): the chaps andops,ops, i was Page 11 • by Diva (ID 289827): OMG I d thd the surprise • by cat (ID 290262): at firstt tht this Page 12 • and once again, sliverblade (who i think couldn’t spell even when he was making up his author name) threatens to kick an author’s ass. i think he lives for that. good grief. In story Ch 1 • my love anymor [para] Ap [para] Apparently Ch 2 • love you sch.”ch.” • eyes anile ile as I Ch 3 • expect her toso fso forward • it is not sith ith a boy Ch 4 • heard Mrssay say that • or”unsafex...tex...to an • to her mom [para] “Mo [para] “Mom, Ch 5 • Come and siffy.ffy. • less than...supive,ive, but • as if rberibering Ch 7 • dream about me [para] .” [para] .” • yet, ngelngely • smile and se bac back • ear and mouldoulder Ch 9 • fall over [para] “A [para] “Ah, nothing • just as ea as as mine • that’s what ikes.kes.” Ch 11 • onto thadstadstone directly • How I k I know you Ch 12 • in AN: while and a I wanna know hoch Ich I’ve lost • do me the honf bef becoming Ch 14 • alright?” [para] let let out • to Red? [para] Bug [para] But I beat Ch 15 • absolutely posipositively ready Ch 17 • know thatwe dwe don’t • feel so goo [para] I [para] I barely • feel it brpastpast the first Ch 18 • my thigh [para] I [para] I look • you’rriourious, aren’t • doin’ the runn” [para] “ • added ano. Fo. Fourteen • th. th. I think • that’s justt a t a soul mate Ch 19 • lovelove you Buffy • fingers into hai hair Ch 20 • her mouthmy nmy neck • problem [para] Wh [para] What the • black contrastigaingainst the • been tlothlothes demon • changes fseduseductive to annoyed • cock throug box boxers • still able rocerocess logical Ch 21 • just slowlfts fts her arm • The breattchetches in my • my breasts anstanstantly • leans over anssessses her . . . a sigh anans ans her • “Wi.” [para] .” • But...iftay tay with Ch 22 • best breat knt known • pleaslievlieve me Timeless faith (ID 36740) In summary (inside story): • where thook ook ended • plus at the end of her WARNING in each chapter she says “Adult themes (someday, I plan on being one too)—possible minor? no real other reason to suspect this other than this warning thing. In story Ch 1 • &qu hav have to do • says, inntlyntly • Look me in thes aes and tell Ch 2 • &q I’v I’ve been • Thinking they won’td hed her back • exactly asell ell you • asks.low low nods • spendit ait all on the • line woul gon gone soon • &n [para] Dawn goes over Ch 3 • she’s just so sw&quo” Faith • time” Wilsayssays • Well, geed. d. You and • Willow staro pro protest • God,etimetimes • Dawn&quoaithaith teases • &quYeahYeah • style?”th gth grins • and rctedcted that • have ad ‘ud ‘un • visibly u, cl, clearly • w caw can you do • < sty style=’font-family:”Century Gothic”’>”Trouble? Dawn? • obvious quen. n. • don’t caruot;uot; Faith —bazillion tons of space after last line of chapter for some reason Ch 4 • looks dot tht the sleeping • &quWellWell • where am I?’ p> (there seem to be a lot of code-type glitches in this one) • probabld a d a good laugh • herself [para] pan> [para] • back for her room. [para] p> [para] • &”’>” I know I’m kinda • thinks to hlf • think I’dspanspan>do something • foreman’s ileriler. • f !sf !supportEmptyParas]> • < sty style=’font-family:”Century Gothic”’>” I mean, she • year or two.p> • pouting, &quout tut that was • asks, uney, &y, “ Why • what is it?t; Wt; Willow • in an &q up& up” • of this f, bf, but some • disappointment singsing her • there, there hoquotquot; Faith • lasslass=MsoNormal> • the speBut But it’s • Whawerewere...you • brought her back!” [para] /p> Ch 5 • say hinghing, just • &qu>” You’re funny • see her f She She turns • t;B?t;B?” She asks • &qu>”N-N-No, B • Nou’reu’re not dead . . . She continuequotquot; • lasslass=MsoBodyText>” Well, we got Ch 6 • attacked by ach och of vampires • expres gui guilty and • leave it like . We. We all • &;Wel;Well, you’re done • ndifndif]> • replies, &q do do we know • lasslass=MsoNormal>” Whuot;uot; She asks • o:p> Ch 7 In summary: • Summer of h&quh In chapter • p clp class=MsoNormal>Tara looks at her • She nearuns uns into . . . /p> • fridge raid?”< < • &q’>” You ok • in the morning&qu Huh? —after this paragraph i think she forgot to end the italics tag because rest of chapter is in italics, mistakenly • &;Gee;Gee, Dawn • if]> • have reasoDawnDawn • happened ted hed her heart • receiver atarttarts dialing • temporary m su superiority • not be c’> breakfast&q Buf Buffy’s Ch 8 In summary: Seasonsfaitfaith • help frara,ara, Xander • she be left e?&qe?” Buffy • lasslass=MsoNormal>” Hey... P-nut • lasslass=MsoNormal>” Of course! • speechl Tot Totally pre prepared • And I’m bloway.way. God • light of it,ot; ot; Swiss-cheese • looks puz. &q. • fhead bacme ame alone • &nbs[end[endif]> • couple of shoulbagsbags • t; It; Isn’t that Ch 9 • An embared ed silence • They’re iddeidden for a • but firm.an> • didn’t know, &; Sh; She stops • Buffy is... flummoxed . What’d I do? God, what’s wrong? —at this point i think she forgot to close her italics tag YET AGAIN as rest of chapter is mistakenly in italics Ch 10 • smiles at F. Sh. She shakes • don’t wha what to do here • feel you’re e hee helpin’ • no, I git&qit” Buffy • fighfights him, but • Buffy is y, wy, waiting • Burummrummages through Ch 11 —after “walks back to her room to dress” there is a line of code that is written out in text • To the hospital. doctdoctor. • Buffy tra off off, not • whae’s e’s doing • for soeasoeason feeling • Yes honey,&nbbut but only • &quure,ure,honey Ch 12 • first line after summary etc.: &n • in frof hef her, but • her vosmalsmall, afraid Ch 13 • isn’t thoughouching • my true aspeOf cOf course • with her huaithaith is overwhelmed • It’e ofe of the very • feels as er ser soul Ch 14 • Herathiathing is slow • It’s nge nge to her • &quoawn awn says • addresses Dawn, &q Who Wh ARE • She will liveow aow and die • even the novicectitctitioners to • didn’t it Rt? Ht? Having • clasclass=MsoNormal> • consume thildiilding • what she’ll do.” [para] &nb> • his et, et, extracts • clasclass=MsoNormal>”Good • Faith!&q Buf Buffy calls • We can help...&; Ch 15 • But she’oppeopped struggling • ndifndif]> • Wils vos voice . . . betrayaluot;uot; But • I w giv give in • saying Willow’s evil?t; Ht; His face • I c bel believe that • can’t accshe’she’s gone • she wasallyally wired • She’s restinw. Sw. She’s • &quanywanyway, she • make any noise. [para] &nb> • then?"ffy ffy says, • Wi coc cocks her head Ch 16 • be takene ofe of once • They shobe kbe kissing • Coeo:p>o:p> • walks into traitraining room • cla class=MsoNormal>” Ahhh... tired • clasclass=MsoNormal>” Act?” • Dawn to:p> • Fai Faith...i com coming • doesdoesn’t finish • &; Ac; Actually • havne ine it • and abs absorbs it into • out, gng hng her to throw • ground shud aga again • I’t f’t find Buffy • al’>” it would appear • screams at him. [para] if]> Connections (ID 36114) In reviews • by cat (ID 285149): so would hyou you better • by Anon (ID 285187): youta mta make In story • just jumpyou you and Excess baggage (ID 35961) • not that much.” [para] /p> • f !sf !supportEmptyParas]> • you weeadyeady to hear • don’t yoll mll me now • You okot; • Uquott dt did you • YI knI know but Graduation (ID 35962) • I did th reg regretted • they left the . [cuts off, not sure if it’s a glitch or au oversight] • Itn>It’s your • Shn>She turned • You perhperhaps a year • ok now.” /p> • brunette fros shs she found Things discovered while shopping (ID 35689) In reviews • by Haggis (ID 289227): finds out whatdelidelia is doing In story • in summary: Cordelia. Sometduriduring the • Cordelia politel>tol>told her • playin’ dress-uNot Not in • You me wme will go Anything goes (ID 34690) • make it ha for for me to • And esereserves better One: the one where i read your mind (ID 34667) In reviews • by wilcat (ID 273748): this storyr thr that you In story • French babies lear. ID. IDIOT. • Buf#822#8221; he stopped her • feet#822#8221; She • This is andinnding • him.RHe cHe could • Her eyes are ong.&ng.” • passed out in tschoochool cafeteria • had beesaulsaulting her • as burden,th th seemed • not the u sel self-assured • lips at the ima image • one tiist ist in her • afraid tha I c I come too • dew clingto tto the • voiceset aet and • office to er ier it • He frelirelief that • just go stra fro from patrol • Like her, owneowner of the • more than slrealready did • mind wandeand and now • having herlooklook for the • She didnt t;t think that • Mr. Giles221;221; She replied • at the pinzz. zz. • bright, all ligss, ss, inside • past his ime,ime, the sun • coaxing from Faith (followed by a long line of --------------< ?) • Giles stifled ah ofh of frustration • over to hehe She Summers • you two dot hot have a paint • good. RReliRelieved Joyce • Wip>Willow recalled • on Faith’se. Te. The tiny • Faith saw thaxiouxious look • couldn’t beliet. Tt. To be here • alerted themJoycJoyce arrival Forbidden fruit (ID 34407) Ch 2 *Mmmlovelove waking • over buffy e whe whispering • * cho Wil Willows —the last reviewer who says these 2 chapters are reversed is correct, i think. 2 should come first. i suspect she had them both written and posted in the wrong order. Smitten (ID 27192) In reviews Page 1 • by Tab (ID 215626): wdid did not see. . . Im kinda h to to see Page 2 • by EvilDoer (ID 215783): dead...a. [para] g. [para] great • by lemons (ID 216108): angel... oll [para] ll • by Jane (ID 217372): I wie che checking Page 3 • by lemons (ID 218591): hanging on every damrd! rd! please • by Jane (ID 218693): priorities stht, ht, woman • by Dylan (ID 220848): feeling ‘liomeoomeone was Page 5 • by Dylan (ID 269833): before. n’t n’t know what In story Menu 1 • Buffy of beihickhicken, and • and followed Faith [para] Fai [para] Faith was leaning • nerve to anytanything • Aalinaline pumped • at her ngelngely, like they were woing ing about • shrugged, thevilevil-may-care • Shunchunched herself • cleavage-baringk tok top and • sure as helln’tn’t disappointment Menu 2 • of the BronzShe She felt Menu 3 • tongue out, feg thg the heat Menu 4 • of Faith’s motooktook her • where they werarlyarly joined • wink-w nud nudge-nudge Menu 5 • Buffychedched for Faith’s Menu 6 • read Faitconcconcern in the • wouldn’t let her bs des desires • or elf.elf. Please • want Giles to . S. She didn’t Menu 7 • nig night outside • where she’dten ten it • sheets. fy gfy gasped Menu 8 • Buflenclenched her jaw True faith (ID 29500) In reviews Page 2 • by AnnaG (ID 235663): Is tha coa connection Page 3 • by drowned_star (ID 235732): as long as there’s mof itf it • by lycanthrope (ID 236109): before the. his is Page 4 • by feather (ID 236375): feeling the sp bet btween Page 5 • by poet (ID 237137): up as Faith. biantiant. So • by Dylan (ID 237178): Yay fhe whe wonder • by PhOeNiX (ID 237447): waiting for nextnext chappie Page 9 • by feather (ID 267638): just so RIGits its like • by ELR (ID 268633): write a kics sts story and —this review ID 268633 is duplicated as 268634, remove dup In story Ch 1 • her should The The girl • none of her buss. ss. Somehow • Th [para] The girl’s • You’re her brot” “ Then • Tru said [para] “I [para] “It’s kind Ch 2 • could r Har Harri Ch 3 • She looked ely lly like Ch 4 • years ago,” shed. d. Ch 5 • stuttered on the other ef thf the li [para] T [para] Tru glanced Ch 6 • imply wver ver spasm Ch 8 • silently recithe the number • Boy mou made your Ch 11 • out of nre, re, like lightning Ch 12 • and felffyffy’s laughter • returning the prre. re. Buffy Ch 13 • knew why Willod bed believed Ch 14 • cra cracked her • next to Faitskinskin inside • looked upher-her—they • as thevatevator doors Ch 15 • or so Buffy tht, st, she • going downhillr sir since • alive wa lia little • part of the plan, th [cuts off] Ch 16 • Truled led and • shaft of the Scytheuffyuffy could • stupid to stop fing, ng, and • Because Ickedcked you • Shved ved a hef a f a lot more . . . ‘cause s bus busy killing • ogling your doppelgan” [para] “ [para] “What Ch 17 • was gone’d e’d be asking • I know. I g go. go.” • kiss with a gi The The Willow says (34106) • y hey hesitated • endings in cli clitoris • Willow’s pagaiagainst it every • vaguely heaantsants of • and don’tto tto the • never std mod moving I like you (ID 31610) Ch 1 • would she ask a thiike ike that Ch 2 • thought youldould use some • should tal him him about Ch 3 • that’s all I have ty I y I won’t Necessary echoes (ID 33453) In reviews • by Sun-chan (ID 264050): I loved tonceoncept of Quote
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