Mamacita Posted June 14, 2009 Report Posted June 14, 2009 GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 29 Master tara: revenge of evil puppy (ID 33318) • kind of eatieating • sterster listened very • the first,actuactual male, • Snucknuck a sideways • rather lasciviouspracpractically • some nerve!&; Wi; Willow • 7;Hi7;His medallion • I’veer her heard your • what48; 48; the vampire • she doe148;148; Just because (ID 26125) In reviews —on page 3, reviewer rayne (ID 210829,30,31,32,33,34) just repeated the same review over and over 6 times. au left them all there but i don’t know...is that kind of a false review count? geez! just pounding the same review in there repeatedly. is that legit? —on page 4, by wynter, 2004-07-30 (ID 258862) • ‘chapters’ on way.way In disclaimer • don’t belon me, me, In story Ch 1 • boundary rienriendship • B yel yelled • and bego clo claw herself . . . toward the wa. Th. Then Illumination (ID 32183) In reviews —by Deacon, ID 257661 • Mmmmm’del’deliciously In story • doneHer Her facial • gentle insice oce of her teeth Master tara: master witch of sunnydale (ID 31901) • last line ends abruptly—and story is only a paragraph long? i think something is definitely missing, at least judging by the other “master tara” story on this page. looks like there was a “catastrophic failure” of some kind! Catch me if i fall (ID 30652) • from heuth uth due to The veracity of vamp willow (ID 30659) • site’s chat r Th The girl • a largest fst from the • enjg Tag Tara’s livelive’ scent • Completely diointointed in • I li-li-aluealue you [she stutters, so i think this should be “li-li-value you”] • if Willow fthe the same • Xander prowlingind ind her • in thectaectator stands • s,s,” Willow agreed Slow burn (ID 29971) • olive skinningning with • of the musclesher her arm • trying to move ll. [para] ll. Into exile (ID 29927) • didmattmatter out here • legs pus her her further • greet eartearth again • cavern of blacknesordeordering on What is everything to faith? (ID 27964) Ch 1 • fy lfy laughed • the sho should I tell Ch 2 • Faith lookraigraight ahead • say, youe mee me • slayer slarienriendly love Chasing the girl (ID 28763) Ch 3 • was shorter,eredered, and • grow up, r? i ? I mean Ch 4 • for twoks. [para] ks. Ch 5 • vampires caI waI was Chosen • gonna talk t She She asked Ch 7 • they decideat tat to do • laying ofloafloat in the • didn’t droif tif that’s • just stared.ame ame out Ch 8 • Rose to h. [para] h. • Shit, Sh’ Fa’ Faith • down on thoundound. • Slwithwith Faith Ch 9 • th wth walked into • in.”fy sfy said Ch 11 • didn’te mue much for me Ch 12 • sleep in, iere.ere.” • threw the cloton ton the • “e. Fe. Faith • Buffyd, ld, lying Ch 13 • Buf [para] Buffy rolled over Ch 15 • Buffy saidakinaking her Ch 16 • “Hey, Faithy.” She . [para] . Ch 17 • So ar thominoming? Ch 20 • reach youdidndidn’t want • had her haon Fon Faith’s • would have maou dou do • want to destrou aou and • don’t deservebe hbe hurt Ch 21 • I can’t s. Bu. But I Ch 22 • go back to sle’k?’k?” • she didn’tieveieve me though Ch 24 • Her mindn swn switched • inside ach.ach. Buffy • giving a strthruthrust with Vindicated (ID 28408) Ch 1 • claws Spikfaceface leaving • were raised in a ing ing pack • a step ard.ard • what sad jad just agreed Ch 2 • from Drua’s.a’s. He Ch 3 • that were attemptingstarstart something • wearing polyr anr and tight • eyes but co’t h’t hide her • Befshe she could Ch 4 • would moskelykely take the • smir “Ye “Yeah well • more shokedoked at Faith Ch 5 • My plalwaylways end up . . . he She She flicked • night of her li [cuts off] • casomesome time Surprises (ID 28510) In reviews Page 2 —Carla, 2004-06-09 (ID 229998) • have meereserested In story Ch 1 • sighed for thcondcond, Ch 4 • come onowpoowpoke Ch 8 • h mah made her • and laown.own. Ch 9 • crossed the droomroom and Ch 10 • stretching her le [para] X [para] Xander • “H [para] “Hi,” she said Ch 11 • Buat sat special • girl Faiad sad smiled Ch 12 • Why are you soiousious ,” she • view,”th sth said • at this pointilltilled around • into houghoughly • looking iFaitFaith’s • necfuckfuck me B • Wi?” h?” he said • To beaith ith at her Ch 13 • Willow spat.FaitFaith’s Ch 14 • you just a p a piece too Ch 15 • doesn’t mI woI won’t • holding uppeupper body • was a wackincking the Crawling towards ecstasy (ID 29472) • roamoverover the side All i need (ID 29196) In reviews —Carla, ID 231301 • as soon areadread dorm In story • and into showshower for me Quote
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