I don't know why people are suddenly starting to comment on this topic. But, I'm not complaining! Seriously, thanks for the reply. The POV is Shawn's, not necessarily my own. Remember, Shawn's thought are NOT Young Sage's thoughts. Nor Anthony's, come to think of it. Though Shawn and Anthony won't admit it, they really do argue like an old married couple. I made BSC to be something different than your run-of-the-mill slash fic, focusing on REAL guys with REAL problems, in the REAL world. No vampires or government conspiricies here! Or feminine boys (except for Peter). I tend to avoid them, even in real life. I figured that if Shawn and Anthony are truly virgins (at least to oral sex), then it would be highly unlikely that they'd be "experts" in the field on their first go. Thus, the scene you're talking about, knight, where they're both clearly inexperienced and totally don't know what to do or how to react. That's all for now, folks. Keep replying here as well as the actual story! And if you have any questions or need something clarified, then ask away here as well. No two week wait here, no-sir-ee! ~YS