I instead, read your story in the anime section under Death Note. The story I read was 'Chained Heart'. You already know I am a Death Note fan. >.>;
My review: I like how you have the story so far. I would like it if you put more detail into the plot on the hunt for Kira and as well L's thoughts on the whole matter of being with Light who he still suspects to be Kira. He does that a lot throughout part of the series and you don't really show him thinking that very much or state it much. I know you do once or twice, but not enough as would L have done it. Don't get me wrong, I still like the story so don't think I am flaming you for this, lol XD; There is also a lot of smut in it... >.> which seems kind of weird for the two, but that doesn't mean I don't like it cause I do! X3 I guess I am one of those people who aren't in it for the sex when it come to reading a fan fic... yes, I know... I am weird... -__- But I do enjoy reading one that do have it in there. Anywho, I like it so far and wonder how you will end it. Have you watched the whole series or are you only following along to what is shown on tv? Here's the Death Note series in case you haven't and want to watch the whole thing to help you out with your story. I must warn you that it is subtitled in english. o.o Well I hope I was of help with my review! :3 I hope you read my story~! X3
My vote: +++