Kyo-nezumi

I need a beta for my story Rain I beilieve my current beta had lost internet acess and I need some to me to write better and inprove my writing, I'm now 23 chapters into the story and I just began the new chapter. Here's a link to may story: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544192101 So look it over and tell me if you can help me with future chapters thank you very much for taking your time and reading this.

That what go me into slash. I did see about 20 or so eps first. I hated Relena I still her and several other like Kagome. I always found guy on guy interesting, however, I didn't knwo had the same intrest as me. Untill I came a cross a 1x2 Heero/Duo fanfic and as they say it wnet down hill from there. Sure I read het once in a blue moon in the origanal section but I jsut can't get into it any more. As time went on it extende to Harry/Draco Sev/Sirus Sirus/Remus Inuyash/Varios males Naruto/Sasuke ... etc I can gone forever. But that what happened me and I'm glad it did!

Title: Rain Status: Work in Progress Chapters: 21 Author: Kyo-nezumi Link: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544192101 Summary: Elvin Prince Syri's life was about to change completely! His father promised him away, and now he was betrothed to Prince Keitaro of the La'Ria realm. Will the two be able to like each other under such circumstances? MPREG,, N/C The story as time went on extended past it summary, with bonded elves chaeting on there mates, a threesome and with the intruduction of the character Zeke who isn't all that he seem. He may be the downfall of them all. That all I can say without giving too much way. Please READ AND REVIEW! TELL ME WHAT YOU LIKE? DON'T LIKE? FAVORITE CHARACTER(S)? LEAST FAVORAITE CHARACTER(S)? AND WHY IF YOU WANT TO? WHAT NEEDS TO BE IMPROVED? aND ANY OTHER THINGS THAT COMES TO MIND.