[Need A Beta For A Sexpistols Story]

I have checked and double checked my 1,612wd slash Sex Pistols story. Unfortunatly I have yet to find a good computer program that can tell me where all the commas go or don't go! Can you help me give the story a once over from someone that knows grammatically what's what?

[Calling all Sex Pistols Fans]

Topic Title: Sex Pistols Fan Fiction

Topic Description: Promotion of my Sex Pistols Fan Fiction

I have posted three new one shot fan fiction pieces about the Sex Pistols. If you like punk or the good old heyday punk era, which I obviously do, please check out my stories!

Title: Various

Author: Rottengrl

Summary: Sex Pistols slash fanfiction with Johhny as a main character in all of them.

Rating: Adult +.

Pairings: John and Sid/John Sid and Steve/John and Malcom

Feedback: Yes please. If you have a story you would like me to review I would be happy to!

URL: http://celeb.adult-fanfiction.org/authors.php?no=1296838799

Thanks,

Rottengrl

[Oh Noes! Where's The SEX?! /panic]

I'm hoping that my story will be taken well (this is the first one I posted here). I find it difficult to find a place where the characters can have sex but you can also tell a story. Your correct, most people want one or the other! I have trouble having characters get together if I can't figure a way they would want to be with each other first (hence a story).

Reviews are tricky since the person cannot hear the tone in which you are delivering your message. Still, I like feedback but sometimes you have to take things with a large grain if salt.

I have really enjoyed the stories I find on this site! Some great writing going on!!!!

[The Long and Winding Road]

Title: The Long and Winding Road

Author: rottengrl

Rating:A++

Summary:The road of a young Johnny Rotten, his life and love seen through the memories of his Wife and Boyfriend

Feedback:Yes Please!

Fandom:Singers/Sex Pistols

URL: http://celeb.adult-fanfiction.org/main.php?list=1711

I love to write and I love music and this story combines both of my passions. It tells the story of a present day John Lydon (aka Rotten) and his wife Nora plus Lydons boyfriend John "Rambo" Stevens as they look back on their sexy, stormy, steamy past and the winding road that brought them to the present day.