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Star Trekkin' ~ Dr Demento

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You may be underestimating people's stupidity. lol Perhaps you could simply have the character mention that he knows some countries ignorantly call it soccer rather than football, something like that. You're welcome re. the Inuit link. And I'm glad you like my icon. lol

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If he's from Brazil then there's just no way on earth he'd be prepared to call it soccer. But that would be a good reason to have some minor conflict in the story - others keep calling it soccer, and he reminds them occasionally that it's called football, not soccer. If not then just adding a note to the story to explain it would be fine. One way you could have the Brazilian character talk about the food is have an American ask him about it, that would give him an excuse to go into some detail about it. If that's not appropriate then you could either not worry about it at all, or just leave a note explaining what exactly is in the meal if you feel it's important. Oh, I just realised, exactly where is your Brazilian character? Still in Brazil or in America? If he's actually in Brazil then the above things probably won't work, unless you could introduce a foreign character. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Inuit That link will help you with info regarding the Inuit. It also has external links down the bottom for further research. As far as the last question is concerned, that very much depends on the style of the story. There's no right or wrong way to go about it. Look at the old Columbo TV series, with Peter Falk. The start of each episode showed who gets murdered and who did it. The rest of the show is about how Columbo finds out for himself who the killer is. And it works, primarily because of the Columbo character. Both of the options you suggested would work, how well depends on the story itself, and you're probably in the best position to decide which way might work best. I hope at least some of that helps.

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Turn Me Loose ~ Loverboy

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Yeah well some people see Mary Sue's when there simply aren't any to see. You can safely ignore people who say it's a Mary Sue.

Ah I see, thanks.

On my profile thingy, to the left, under the blue "Member" button, I have 5 little black (or possibly dark grey) squares. Erm... is that a good thing or a bad thing?

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Well to truly know if it's a Mary Sue or not, I'd have to know you much better than I do - which is not at all - but unless you weigh 475 pounds and have detachable legs, I'd have to say it doesn't sound terribly Mary Sue-ish to me.

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Okie dokie, I'll give that a try, thanks.

Is it normal to have to log in sometimes several times a day, even though I have it selected to remember me? I didn't have this problem with the old forum, so I'm wondering if settings have been changed regarding that or if it's just me for some odd reason.

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I have a whole range of name generating websites bookmarked to help out. I even have a couple of suburb name generators, which have come in handy.

I agree with the previous two people. I don't mind editing at all, and I find it an integral part of the writing process itself, and is really no different at all. No matter how carefully I write, I always find errors when I proofread my story. And it's not just errors, I ALWAYS find better words and phrases to use, and even whole paragraphs, things that only make my story better. One technique many writers use is to just get the story down, and then refine it in proofreading. Professional authors will proofread their entire novel multiple times, from start to finish, before it's submitted to the publisher, even highly successful authors. So proofreading shouldn't be seen as a chore, but as a great chance to improve on your story.