Aserenity

here's my top three stories that I have been into this week. (all follow under catagory of orginal stories) Infliction of Pain -genre- Drama The Support Group -genre- Drama Almost Alive -genre- Dark Fiction maybe check them out?what are your's?

Here's my top three stories that I have been into this week. (all follow under catagory of orginal stories) Infliction of Pain -genre- Drama The Support Group -genre- Drama Almost Alive -genre- Dark Fiction maybe check them out? What are your's?

ooo thats a very lovely idea!

Don't believe everything that's posted on a website... yes I'm older than 18 but I refuse to put any personal information (such as my real birthday, where I live, etc.) on the web. Its a very dangerous place.

yeah those are pretty old...from like three years ago. All the stories are just saved up on my computer, completed and collecting dust...so I decided to post them on here, curious of what other's may think. Also you talk about making a living of it? Um I have yet to start life and career...Its pretty obvious that I'm very young. And starting young is like the "bread and butter" to a developed writer because I have room to make those improvements and with NEW life experiences, I can have FRESH ideas. Like they say: "Never teach an old dog new tricks."..hopefully by the time I'm your age I'll be developing and publishing stories not posting them on a website. ETA: and I've never revealed how old I was.

thank you all...i have descided to continue researching but start making outlines and characterization charts...here's a great site that gives advice and also offers good questions to ask yourself...and it inspires you to kind of ponder more into your story..the meaning, the theme, the twist and turns etc. A good story consist of real, detailed characters, that you grow to know and love..here's the site if anyone else is feeling my pain... http://users.wirefire.com/tritt/tip8.html thank you so much for the advice I will do everything you guys said...I can't tell you how much this has help organize all my thoughts! ( i will try outlines, the "legal pad", and more research...also i just found some really great pictures to get me in the mood!!!!) Thanks Again! And keep writing!

men have it so easy its not fair

so at the moment i am working at making a novel....i'm at the research stage and i have so much left to read up on (since the story takes place in another century) but i want to write NOW! i have dreams about the story and have days where the juices are just pumping and i just feel so alive and just want to write! But i kind of think i'm not ready but I want sooooo badly to be...should I start and keep doing the research inbetween or take a long period of time to research? Also how do I get started? I want the first paragraph to be amazing (as the rest of the book) but how do i get inspired? How do I organize my ideas? should I make different drafts of the first paragragh? Please give a desperate writer your advice!

this is why i hate politics.

"That's what I'd like for my first time, but I won't know what it's like until I'm actually there. After that, I wouldn't mind casual sex. I'd only draw the line at having sex with a complete stranger. I wouldn't mind having kinky sex either. I like to exercise and express my imagination. " Amen sister....let's just say whoever i marry, may it be my boyfriend now or someone else (i'm young...i pretty much have all the time in the world) they won't go un saftisfied jk lol! Seriously though, i do agree with some of the stuff you say and i think i will start allowing my characters to be themselves...maybe if it even calls for it they'll have sex My point was we kind of live in a world today where everyone does what they want, live in the moment, we're all going to die anyway....and though i love impulses (i pierced my own navel two days ago...i wish i thought that one though) people need to think of the real consequences (sorry for reposting)

yeah that makes a lot of sense! thanks!

oops read it wrong. but do you have any advice for me? All my characters seem to be the same?

omg i know exactly what you mean...i can't seem to get any of my characters to have sex! i don't know if its because i vaule it so much but for some reason i just can't.

adressing this to everyone: 1. i know people's opinions are very different then mine....if you knew me personally one characteristic ofmine would hit you square in the face: i am very outgoing and open minded...i'm a bit of a hippie ..and if i didn't understand that everyone else had different ideas why would i post this forum? i would have no reason to. i like hearing people's ideas and debating with them. its a favorite hobby and i hate when i start a debate, people automatically think i'm attacking them personally...i do not think you're a slut if you have sex...like i've said before: your body do what you want. 2. ignorance can be looked at in two different ways: One is the way a lot of you see it: unexperience, sheltered, trying to mask or being unaware of the danger or situation around you. I view it as number 2: believeing...being a kid again...i know it sounds stupid but i kind of miss all the purity all the simple mindedness that came with being a child...i kind of think in a way people are trying to grow up way to fast and don't spend time thinking in that way...beileveing, no questions asked. (i know it sounds stupid) 3. my final thought is this....many people have sex, many of my friends, many of my peers...but i stay the same why? because i don't want to be like them..i've never followed the crowd and i never will....have i ever considered having sex? of course...have i been close? many many times...but through my life i've changed reilgons, altered my whole way of thinking...can't I keep one thing, one vaule I've dreamed about since i knew what sex was, the same? I keep changing and changing everyday and i contradict every thing i say but there's one thing i'm sure of...i vaule my virginity and will remain a virgin till marriage....do what you want...but i choose this. as one of my teachers said: "if you don't have an opinion in the world, get the hell out!" (4. and again sorry i keep reposting....forums are new to me) I love you all and thanks for the response!

i love to dance and i love techno.