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  1. Second or Third Person for erotic Textadventure?

    in Writers' Corner

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    So, I want to write a Text Adventure in the style of my first story (https://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600091828).

    The player will have the ability to make choices and will also have stats that influence what choices they can make and how they play out.
    Still, it should feel more like an interactive story than a game.

    At the same time (you know that if you read my story) it will involve much sex and not always the nice kind, which is also what I want to focus on.

    Now my question: Do you think second or third person would be better for the writing style of such a project?

    I personally think second person is better, as it fits the choice-making part, which should be the selling point of the whole thing.
    But at the same time I imagine many (especially male) readers might be put off by that in the sex-scenes, which will be frequent and a large part of the whole experience.

    To demonstrate what I mean, here is an example (that I just made up) in both styles:
     

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    After you enter the alleyway, Marcurio pushes you against the wall and immediately starts groping you. While one of his hands is kneading your breasts, the other one wanders downwards, pulls out his cock and starts stroking it.
    In the dark you can barely see it and only recognize it’s frightening size.
    ”Come on, now it’s time you pay me back” he says, and gets closer to you.

            – You don’t want this and try to push him away
            – Maybe he will be satisfied if you comply a little bit, so you start stroking his cock
            – You think it is better to give him what he wants, so you drop to your knees and open your mouth
            – You are to scared to do anything and just let him continue

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    After entering the alleyway, Marcurio pushes Saffy against the wall and immediately starts groping her. While one of his hands is kneading your breasts, the other one wanders downwards, pulls out his cock and starts stroking it.
    In the dark she can barely see it and only recognizes it’s frightening size.
    ”Come on, now it’s time you pay me back” he says, and gets closer to her.

    What does Saffy do:
            – She doesn’t want this and tries to push him away
            – Thinking he might be satisfied by a little compliance, she starts stroking his cock
            – Thinking it is better to give him what he wants she drops to her knees and opens her mouth
            – To scared to do anything she just stands there and lets him continue

    I like the first one way better, but what do you think?

  5. Review Replies and Updates for "Saffys failed adventures"

    in Het-Male/Female

    Posted

    Chapter 6 will be out in the next few days.
    It contains pretty much no story and is mostly just sex.
    Chapter 7 will probably be more character development again (in some sense at least).

    I have only vague ideas for the story after chapter 7 so I will probably do a poll again when uploading Chapter 6 and hope that someone answers.

    Feel free to post your own ideas of what could happen next here!

  8. Review Replies and Updates for "Saffys failed adventures"

    in Het-Male/Female

    Posted

    Reply to ninesenshi’s review:

    I’m happy that you like the story, chapter 5 is right on the way.

    Currently you are the only participant in the poll, so if that stays like that until I get to the spicy part your wish for bestiality shall be my command. Don’t expect too much of such things in the future though, it is not a thing I like that much personally and I still write the story mainly for myself. But from time to time it is enjoyable.


    And let me just say, at least one of your wishes will be fulfilled ;).

  9. Review Replies and Updates for "Saffys failed adventures"

    in Het-Male/Female

    Posted

    Hey everyone, this is gonna be a general thread for me to post updates on the story, reply to reviews and do stuff like polls and similar things. Link to the story: https://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600091828

     

    Short description of the Story:

    Saffy, a Dunmer adventurer, is earning her living by fighting bandits and collecting their bountys. But one day hiring another mercenery is her undoing, and she has to face the consequences of misjudging the wrong person.

  11. How do I edit Content Tags?

    in Archive Tech Support

    Posted

    https://imgur.com/a/hoDaA0i

    One inconvenient thing is, that there is now drop down menu to choose tags from, as there is when you create the story the first time.
    But that’s not really a bit problem, I can just look them up on other stories for example.

    But when I edit the tags by hand, say I add Angst:
    https://imgur.com/a/Tw2Qaz6

    and press “Edit Story”, nothing changes.
    I’ve tried it a few times already and also waited a few days, still nothing.

    Is this a bug or am I doing something wrong?
    Thanks for all answers.

  12. Saffys failed Adventures

    in Promote a Story!

    Posted

    Author: writtendotmd
    Title: Saffys failed Adventures
    Summary: Saffy, a Dunmer adventurer, is earning her living by fighting bandits and collecting their bountys. But one day hiring another mercenery is her undoing, and she has to face the consequences of misjudging the wrong person.
    Feedback: Any would be appreciated greatly
    Fandom: The Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim
    Warnings: Dom, Ds, Humil, MF, Oral, Rape, SH, Violence

    Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered
    URL: https://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600091828

    I hope you enjoy this story, as it is the first one I’ve ever written. I’m not a native english speaker, so sorry for any grammar mistakes.
    Reviews and general advice would be really appreciated.

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