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Hi Ibex, thanks for the comment. I think I'm sold on doing two scenes. Time to start writing.

Hi ABigFan, thanks for the comment. I'm leaning that way, but I'll wait for any more opinions and then get writing.

Hi ABigFan, I see what you mean. I think the issue I have is I can't think of a scenario where a group of "business women" are going to be having a meeting. Aside from a social setting, those sort of boardroom settings would be reserved for lawyers and executives. You're hardly going to have a woman who owns a chain of nail salons sitting down for a meeting with one who runs a PR firm, another who's a Real Estate Agent, another who owns several restaurants. Maybe individual meetings, but you wouldn't get all of them together at once unless it was purely social - hence the luxury day spa - they're there to get their manicures and pedicures, and then Lara gives them a foot massage and happy ending. If you guys want something in business suits, I think it would need to be an executive-style meeting. In which case, I'd do the spa scene with the footballer's wives and socialites / influencers, and then do a second scene in a boardroom. For the spa, I'd make it more personal by making one of the participants the young gold-digging fiance of Lara's Uncle Errol, who tried to steal her Title and inheritance when Lara's father died by claiming she was born out of wedlock. That'll open the door to some family fun later on. Or I could go younger and have her twin younger cousins who hate her be present (in this case Uncle Errol's wife would need to be older to make the ages work, so the girls can be 18). For the second scene, I'd make it a business meeting between Jacqueline Natla (another of Lara's enemies) and a lesbian Chinese CEO with a sadistic foot fetish, where Lara is the gift to celebrate their new joint venture. I'd probably save the footing (foot-fisting?) for this scene (sadistic Asian female with small feet). Probably also some female personal assistants present to film some trophy videos and participate (but only under the orders of their demanding femdom bosses). Let me know whether you guys prefer the above idea, or stick with the business women in the day spa idea.

Hi Lara Crass - not in this story. There will be a dog and pony show for Lara in Tomb Raider Bliss, but nothing like that planned for Voluntary Enslavement.

Hi ABigFan, glad you enjoyed the last chapter. The plan for the business women is that they will be enjoying a session at a luxury country club or day spa - pedicures, manicures etc and then Lara comes in to provide foot massages and happy endings - so I'm planning a relaxing bathrobe and champagne sort of setting for the business women (they work hard and deserve to treat themselves), rather than a boardroom with suits and high heels. Plus I feel like a boardroom would be more indicative of female executives, rather than business women.

Hi Ibex, thanks for the vote. The plan for the final chapter will be a "12-months later" chapter, showing Lara's life a year out from the end of her slave contract. It will probably show Lara and Sarah engaged but not married yet. Lara will have tried to go her own way, but she's too addicted to the excitement and drama that Sarah brings into her life (basically setting Sarah up as Lara's bad boy ex - she's knows it's an unhealthy relationship, but she keeps going back to it). 3 votes for business women. I think we have a winner.

Thanks for the vote SetV. No realisation yet - Lara's like a college kid on spring break, stuck in a fog of sexual gratification that she has convinced herself will not have lasting consequences for her life. 2 votes for business women.

1 vote for business women Hi LHunt, thanks for voting. Whichever ends up winning, I'll be going for a new money / old money dynamic. Women who were excluded from high society because they didn't go to the right school or have the right surname, sick of being looked down on and now able to take their frustrations out on a member of the aristocracy. And Lara, because of her posh upbringing, will feel that serving them is beneath her, which will add to her humiliation.

Hi everyone, looking for some opinions. I've decided not to use the maids for the foot fetish scene. Instead I'll be using them for a fantasy gangbang scene for Lara's Onlyfans. The scene will be staged in front of the greenscreen. Lara is in a tomb and is captured by a tribe of futa goblins. Maids dressed in green body paint, loincloths, masks and strap-ons. Airtight fun ensues. For the foot fetish scene, Lara is going to be attending a rich country club as a masseuse (specifically a foot masseuse, as this group of women have a fetish for that). They recognise her and want to know why she's working there. She has to explain that she's massively in debt and all her Onlyfans money is going to pay off her loans, and she had to get a second job to support her lifestyle. Mary will be giving her instructions in an earpiece. She makes Lara tell the women that she's willing to perform extra services for more money, like using her mouth and tongue to massage their feet, and offering to give them happy endings. The women think it's hilarious that Lara has been reduced to prostituting herself for a few hundred pounds and eagerly take her up on her offer, even going so far as to offer her more money if she'll stoop even lower (masturbating herself on their feet, letting them foot-fuck her pussy and ass etc). Question - Do you think it would be better with dominant business women or bitchy arrogant footballer's wives?

Hi Winkey, the "bad ending" you describe would probably fit in better as an alternative ending for Natla's Revenge. I've done a Natla, Mary and Sam ending, so I'd probably use that for the Sybil Ending. I teased Lara having her Title and Estate stolen from her by Sybil in the other endings, so it would be perfect here. The original idea was for Sybil to be the new Countess of Abingdon and Lara forced to live her her old house, but as Sybil's maid. That's essentially what most of Voluntary Enslavement is about, hence why I haven't bothered to do the last ending for Natla's Revenge up til now; but I like the idea of Lara becoming property, because bitchy Sybil thinks that even indentured servitude is too good for Lara. She wants Lara to be her property! Also, unlike this story, that story had forced bestiality in it (see the Sam ending and the Mary ending), so Sybil could get Lara some friends to play with. I want to finish the current story first, but I'll get to writing the Natla's Revenge alternative ending next. Good idea - cheers!

Hi Wonky, glad you liked the chapter. I already did the puppy dog thing in Chapter 22, but I do have a pony girl scene planned for later. Thanks for the good wishes.

Hi Lara's Special Stallion, glad you're enjoying the story.

Hi LHunt, glad you liked the new chapter. All of the setup is finished. A lot of it felt like admin - describing Lara's daily routine and her changing mental state (a bit monotonous at times, but necessary to flesh out the story) Now I can finally focus on the fun stuff.

Hi everyone, I hope you're all doing well. I finally found time to finish the next chapter. If you're still here, thanks for being patient.

HiABigFan, twins doing great. Their mum and I are both still very sleep deprived, as the babies are still waking up every 3 to 4 hours for a feed. It'll get better once we get them down to just one feed overnight.