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    3 minutes ago, Guest NOT Mar-Mar said:

    Nah not really. I mean why else am I using a guest account.

    True, kinda walked into that one. So what would you like Tiki to be like, and how much do you feel would be an appropriate price, since this would be my first time doing any commission where I’m the one being paid. And I know you said you wanted it to be like Celica, so if you could expand on that it would make it easier for me to give you what you want.

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    47 minutes ago, Guest NOT Mar-Mar said:

    ayy been reading your shit and I've gotta say it's pretty good. So do you mind taking my request? It's Tiki, the adult version.

     Ayyyy thanks for the compliment. Mind going into some detail about what in particular you like? And you don’t have to specify that it’s adult Tiki as loli is never even going to be considered, as I’m not a sicko. But yeah, I can do a Tiki chapter, I love her awakening design anyway. Maybe I should do commissions for this side thing lol.

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    17 minutes ago, Guest Ikein said:

    well obviously it sounds so good because it is so good. I understand the need for writing a girl taking charge of course I just don’t like that much myself personally so I really appreciate you not doing that for Cherche, especially because almost everyone makes her dominant. Thank you very much for the five millionth time, sorry I ended up making this so complicated lol.

    Nah you’re good mate. The more details you give the better I can put them down. Also the pregnancy thing was only added for celica cause since it’s a series of unrelated one-shots, I don’t have to keep having the girls get lucky with avoiding babies kek

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    29 minutes ago, Guest Ikein said:

    I can’t say I’m really in to that, I mean I don’t mind them existing but I’m not really into the pregnancy thing. As far as “plot” goes by all means go ahead but the pregnancy thing was the one part of the Celica chapter I didn’t really like

    I have absolutely no issue with her being a massive tease, of course provided she learns that teasing for long enough eventually makes something happen. That was phrased really weirdly so I hope you get what I mean. Once again though thank you so much for writing this. 

    Thinking about it I really loved how you wrote Titania, and Cherche is a maid so maybe building off your teasing idea once Rolf decides to just take her because hes tired of her teasing shes actually really submissive? Just a thought though.

    Submissive maid. Why does this sound so good. Eventually I will have to write a girl taking charge though, but yeah that’s workable.

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    43 minutes ago, Guest Ikein said:

    Honestly, nothing that I can think of. Thank you so much for writing it though, I really enjoyed your most recent chapter and just haven’t had a lot of time to write a good comment on it that was more than a sentence saying “hey this was great”. I think it will be more enjoyable if you just do the things I requested and then entirely your own spin on it. Though I suppose now that I think about it while writing this I did like what you did with your Celica chapter where there was a fast forward in time to them still being together. I don’t think it would be very interesting if it was the exact same scenario but I really liked that sort of “a year later” kind of thing. Really just come up with something creative to do with it, as hard of a thing as I imagine that is to do. Once again thank you so much.

    Put my own spin on it, gotcha. And I’ll see if I can’t make some kinda timeskip thing work. (For the record I’ve decided to make her a massive tease so I hope that’s ok)

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    On 11/20/2018 at 3:31 PM, Guest Ikein said:

    Hey, I figured I’d drop a comment here as well since you’ve got it. Dropped a comment on the AO3 post as well but I really love this fic.

    I’m legitimately not sure what else to say because I don’t want to echo what I wrote on AO3 but I think I can touch on literally everyone else since I only talked about what I liked about your Titania chapter.

    Quite frankly you had me captivated as soon as I read “Elincia” followed by the descriptor “skin tight stockings”. Hit a real good preference with that one, the only thing she was missing for me was a green bush and that’s not a big deal at all.

    Mia felt a bit shoehorned in, just randomly noticing a boner and instead of being like “oh uh, I guess that would be an issue, well go deal with it then” she just sucks him off. I don’t actually have an issue with it at all I just felt it a bit fast of an escalation.

    Can’t really say a whole lot about Lethe or Aimee though because I’m not a particular fan of Aimee and I straight up just don’t like Lethe. The writing of their chapters however was quite good and I still read them, meaning it was good enough that I actively read smut about a character I don’t even like. On the other hand though, I loved the Mist section of the Aimee chapter. I also don’t really like Heather, probably less than Lethe even, but the Mist was so damn good I didn’t even care.

    I almost feel wrong making this the most detailed part of the comment but as for your comment about taking requests for characters outside of RD I would absolutely love to see you write something with Cherche from Awakening. My only absolute musts with it are that she be described with pubic hair like your Mia and Titania and that focus is put on her outfit, maybe she doesn’t even take it off, she just goes functionally nude (IE breasts out ass and pussy accessible but otherwise clothed). Preferences would include anal and public/semi-public but I’m not too concerned with that, I just really want more Cherche since almost nobody writes her. 

    Thank you so much for the great work though, 5 chapters really just isn’t enough for me and I actively await the next one from you, keep it up.

    Yo, bout to start working on Cherche, anything you want to me to add besides what you’ve already got down?

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    3 hours ago, Guest The Count said:

    Welp, I do like that idea but I also wanted a small request of you for the Celica chapter.

    I was re-reading it for the tenth time now and I can't help but think that the part where Rolf bends her over the table and fucks her was a bit too short. Don't get me wrong, the story's still amazing and you got all my preferences perfectly, but could you add a couple of paragraphs to the part after Rolf begins fondling her ass. 

    It would be much appreciated

    Tenth re-read? Damn. I make no promises but I might go back and add on to it so.

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    On 1/4/2019 at 1:22 PM, Guest The Count said:

    Well I have read the Celica chapter you post and all I have to say, is that it is absolute perfection.

    You sir are a gentleman and a scholar. May the blessings of whatever God bears witness to this world be upon you.

     

    Ayyyyy glad you enjoyed it. I was kind of worried you wouldn’t tbh. Anyway, I was thinking of changing things up for the next chapter and having Ike be the star, with Nephenee being the girl. What do you guys think

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    5 minutes ago, Guest Modern Tale Spinner said:

    Love the new spin-off.  If you are taking requests, I would like to see Cath (the female theif from fe6).  As far as content requests, extra rough (consensual) sex would be great.  Like slapping-each-other-fucked-crosseyed rough, or as close to that as you are comfortable 

    Idk about that, since I don’t think I could write it well. And I don’t really like Cath that much so, don’t get your hopes up. Although I do appreciate your liking the spin-off.

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    8 minutes ago, Guest Ikein said:

    Apologies for taking so long to respond to this.

    What did I like about the Mist section? I loved how unexpected it was, by that I mean how Mist didn’t expect it. I mean of course its easy to say that nobody barring Elincia really expected to have their bit of fun but with Mist she was already playing with herself when it happened, she was ready for a good time but wasn’t ready for a good time with another yet still loved it anyway. Other than that I just really liked how you describe Mist and of course how can anyone complain about impromptu lesbians.

    Impromptu lesbians. I don’t know why, but I have the dumbest grin on my face reading that. Ignoring my inner 12 year-old,  I appreciate you going in-depth about why Mist appealed to you so much. I’m glad my intention of her being so damn horny she’d go for anybody got across as well as it did. And you could argue Lethe expected her romp but semantics.

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    1 hour ago, Guest Firion said:

    I am also eagerly awaiting the next chapter. You might remember my comments on AO3, but in case you forgot, I really like your work and wouldn't mind seeing more lactation like in the Elincia chapter as well as more Titania. For new characters I would like to see Nephenee, Nailah, Sigrun and Tanith (those last two could possibly have a threesome with Rolf). If you're planning on covering other games as well, I wouldn't mind seeing Echidna and Cecilia from Binding Blade.

    Sorry for overwhelming you with suggestions. I don't expect you to do all of these but I just wanted to throw some ideas out there in case you ever have writers block or something lol.

    Well I’m both working on the next chapter and fumbling my way through Celica atm, and also getting through an entirely unrelated story on ffnet so I’m juggling three chapters right now so it’s a liiiiitle hectic. Rest assured it’s coming though.

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    On 11/17/2018 at 4:19 AM, Guest The Count said:

    Well my preferred sexual positions are missionary and doggy style. Also I prefer stuff like breasts groping and neck kissing if that's alright. Thanks for hearings me out and I hope to see more from you soon.

     

    BTW I would recommend that you also post your stories on other websites too. Particularly AO3, if only for more view. 

    Yeah that’s easily doable, and since I like putting doggy style in anyways, great for me. And as soon as I can make sense of Ao3’s story transfer system, they’ll be uploaded, or I’ll do ye olde fashioned copy+paste.

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    Having a bit of plot in between the sex is nice like in the latest chapter. I think your sex scenes are getting better and more detailed, and it's always nice seeing RD girls smut. I hope Titania gets another romp later down the road. Keep it up!

    Thanks Kratos! I’ve been trying to add more detail to the scenes, so I’m glad you thought they’ve been improving. Anything details in particular that stand out to you? And as much as it’s still a PWP story, it can’t just be fucking 24/7 now can it? Well it could but that would get boring eventually, and I’m not good enough to make that work. And I think I can work another Titania bit in again, if it’d make you happy.

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    On 11/13/2018 at 3:28 AM, Guest The Count said:

    If you are willing to add girls from other fire emblem games, then can you add Celica from Shadows of Valentia. The only preference I have is creampie, you can fill in the other stuff

    Sure! I’ll probably make a separate story for these types of chapters. Anything else you’d like to see, how you want her described, or is creampie all you’d like?

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