HeXK001

I’m currently working on an AU Bleach story and have two full chapters written and currently working on the third one which is turning out to be a lot longer than planned. So far there are no xxx themes to the story but as it progresses and things develop I’m not going to say there might not be erotic scenes down the road.
Mostly I just want someone to help point out any gaps that I should maybe fill, better ways to word or describe things. Just want help fixing the little things I overlook as I write.