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ok thanks for telling me.
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hey LOL hen you make the new version can you leave up the old version so can continue to read it?
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4 hours ago, LordOfLust said:
Soooo… Yeah this is a bit of a sad update, but I have decided after a small while of frustation over my own story to pull it down by the beginning of the new year. It went a bit off road at some point and as much as I have tried I haven’t been able to fix it, so I’ve have decided to rewrite it all from scrap at some point in the new year, like a completely new story nothing will be reused so it might take some time.
Sorry to the people who still enjoyed it, I know there still is some, hopefully I do better the second time
See ya all in the new year!
heya!!! so will this new story still feature Kushina or a different female?
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Take your time.
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To be honest I would prefer you wrap up the TenTen chapter in one. So if we have to wait a week and get a start on the Tsunade chapter (likely more popular) I would be fine with that.
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Just now, Guest snake1980 said:
nice but I know u are going to have everyone from the leaf but what about other villages? like suna since u could have temari show up to talk about trades between there villages? but when she gets there she see both the fire and wind daimyo there and both use her and when the wind leaves temari goes with him
he has said he might do other villages AFTER the leaf. if he does i would want hot Kunoichi like Yugito and Samui!!
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just read and posted my review on first TenTen chapter!! so is it multiple chapters as the Daimyo hasn't actually gotten a turn yet?
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https://www.wattpad.com/172843817-the-sage-and-the-habanero-how-it-began Kushina is a virgin in this chapter.
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Hotaru is a dirt blonde with green eyes while Shizuka has green eyes and long black eyes.
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I can sum them up. (The pics are online) so Shizuka is currently the leader of a female only minor village. Their tradtion is they only marry a guy if they can beat the girl in combat. She falls in love with Naruto but Naruto refuses to stay with her since he still has a crush on Sakura and obligations to the leaf. She is rather busty.
Hotaru is the 6 tails jinchuuriki apprentice who just follows him around as he is technically rouge. She is shorter than Naruto but shocking pretty curveous.
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Sorry to interrupt but could consider doing “anime only” Kunoichi? Like Shizuka (episode 235) and Hotaru (episodes 144-151). As they are busty and you could do a loophole where since Ahizuka is from a minor village and Hotaru is technically wonderer. They could move to The Leaf and be requested.
they are both young and busty.
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So at least a couple of months before Hinata. I can live with that. Can't wait for next week for first part of TenTen!!
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Hehe no worries. I forgot what is the episode listing right now? TenTen....
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I don't know even though I agree her Last uniform was definelately a looker (hoping she will still be a maiden in your story) her part 2 uniform although was covering still could not prevent her breasts size from being obvious.
I could see the Daimyo getting hooked on Hinata on first glance when she walks in her last uniform (especially her 17 year looks)!!
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Even in the canon Last Movie a 17 year Hinata has blossomed even more with her ninja uniform showing off her thighs and curvy breasts.
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Although the idea of somebody like Hinata dressing up is really exciting!! She is by far the most busty of the Kohona 12!! Even her part 2 outfit can't hide her true figure!!
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Sounds exciting!!
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maybe for TenTen before any kind of real seduction she will be asked to wear something a little more “daring” but necessary “slutty”. something like ninja sandals, black knee length socks, small shorts, and sleeveless loose shirt. TenTen being a tomboy wont think any real threat so she agrees.
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ok i just read it!! maybe i am first or not not sure...lets see Satsuki "waking up" in the middleof her first ride with the Daimyo wasa nice touch. the Yuri seemed pretty good. the maid outfit was amzing espcially with the short but vivid desciption.
for the TenTen chapter in the first part instead of just getting straight to drugs can ou do a few scenes where the Daimyo gets a bit more "hand on" than necessary with TenTen unable to do any real actions for scout away?
Also posted as review on adult fanfic!!
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finally got an account so i can “follow” this forum too!!
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Actually awake now (and got like 2 hours before work) so going to read now and review!! Prob post review here too so people can read.
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Thank you!! Will reward later today!! Super excited!!
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Just now, C_Wade said:
Small progress update, the second and final part of the Satsuki episode is done, counting just about 7750 words. The chapter will be uploaded Sunday as planned, I’ll use the time till then to get started on the Tenten episode.
Hopefully this will help me keep the weekly update schedule.
And once again, thanks to everyone for your support and your ideas.
thanks for keeping us updated!!! just wondering since these are all separate prompts will you tell us how old (approximate) each girl/women so we can imagine a rough appearance?
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since they are essentially AU of each can one have like a virgin Kushina (or Kurenai) who are in the 18’s-early 20’s?
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hi!! can you send a link? i would be interested in reading it! or if its not made yet i would love to read it when you get it posted please!!