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Hey everyone
I'm looking for beta readers to go over a long-term story as I write it - set in a Pokemon AU.
It will have a decently substantial plot and the naughty bits will focus on Futa/Female or Futa/Futa relations, and will occasionally contain furry characters. It will also contain incest - just a fair warning to those of you who might be squeamish about that.
The world will be quite a deviation from the regular pokemon universe; All pokemon will be represented as anthropomorphic versions of themselves and treated as equals (not caught in balls), and humans will share the same powers that were once exclusive to pokemon. In other words, humans will also have types - like fire or steel - that will allow them to shoot fireballs or create metal barriers.
While I'm more than open to receiving any willing beta, those who feel confident in giving feedback concerning the characters and plot, and not solely the technical aspects, will be especially appreciated. And while feedback centered around what I can improve upon is paramount, I also would like betas who can identify what my strengths are.
I'll post the first (very short) entry of the story below so you can get a gist of my writing. Please let me know if you have any questions, and thanks for reading this! Toodles!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_lG3-ylqZ342tBZtD7jzsDThruM4rrGy5CLikoCZWjU/edit?usp=sharing
A To Z Dictionary Of Body Parts And Sexual Acts
in Writers' Corner
Posted · Edited by AlexisRiddle
Neat thread! I'm going to contribute some verbs I've used throughout my erotic writing endeavors. Yay verbs!
These are all taken out of context, but I'm sure creative minds like yourselves could see how they apply to writing various levels of carnal epic-ness.
Arouse
Attend
Batter
Breach
Break
Cascade
Claw
Consume
Desecrate
Devour
Dig
Edge
Enrapture
Erupt
Evoke
Flood
Fondle
Grope
Gush
Hilt
Hypnotize
Indulge
Infuse
Intoxicate
Jolt
Jut
Knead
Lap (as in lapping up something with your tongue)
Lure
Melt
Molest
Obliterate
Overwhelm
Pacify
Pamper
Pierce
Plunder
Plunge
Pound
Pucker
Pulverize
Pump
Punch
Punish
Quake
Ravage
Ravish
Reap
Relish
Rock
Rocket
Salivate
Savage
Seduce
Shoot
Slither
Slurp
Smash
Smother
Summon
Tantalize
Tear
Wreck
Writhe
Violate