The_Yellow_Lantern

Thank you so much for the feedback! I'll have to keep that in mind for when I finish the next chapter. I notice that IPad's don't respond very well with AFF, which has resulted in unbalanced spaces and such. But thanks again for your feedback, I've been dying to hear someone say something about it

Thank you!

Hey there, I wrote a story last week and have updated it with a further 3 chapters since. It has 700+ hits but not a single review. If anyone wouldn't mind reading it and giving me feedback, I'd really appreciate it. I recommend you be a fan of the actual show though to get the most out of it. http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094929 It's basically about Sabine Wren and told mostly from her perspective, her loner attitude from the crew is tested particularly when a most unfortunate event happens to her. Thank you!