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Well I can only hope things will go well with writing, and if you need a beta reader, I can attempt to do so, even if I have no past experience with being one.
What you've wrote so far is amazing
Thank you No_1, i really appreciate that.
You can contact me at this email: sneaky666@outlook.fr
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I have the real life really loaded this year. I write but I have little time.
The fic progress with two other fic that will be posted.
I know it's not fast but it is not abandoned.
for wait a little bit, a little teaser.
The princess of Konoha, heir to one of the largest and powerful clan in the world stood naked before him. One of the most beautiful girls in Konoha was holding Eve before him! Hinata Hyuga. He could see clearly the upper part of her body while everything below the navel was immersed in hot water. Her royal face and perfectly defined with a cute little nose, full lips, her lavender eyes without pupils, which discouraged many men, but that made she more desirable in his eyes, her face was paradoxical incarnation of cute and aristocratic with its sophisticated traits and timid expression look like for a small mouse. A strange mix but making her a beautiful woman, more than the majority of the female population of elementary nations. Naruto could see that she had grown since he left, her dark blue hair flowed down her back now unlike two years ago, with bangs hiding her forehead and two bangs on either side of her head down until her chin. Looking down, admiring her thin shoulders and toned stomach creates by a difficult training, Naruto admired her perfect alabaster skin and spotless. Her look was then attracted by what was most grown at home. Naruto cursed the Creation and all the existing gods having Hinata chest fully revealed to him for the first time. Due to its large jackets, he never realized the size of the breast Hinata. Now he saw it in its full glory, he realized that it was a crime against humanity to conceal this. Her breasts were huge! Naruto was hard to believe that a girl of her age could such a chest size, it should do about the G cup if he was right and than Ero-sennin was well educated. Perfectly round, with no traces of sagging, it seemed to float in zero gravity while overcoming two thick nipples and a wide halo of light pink that made it absolutely wanted to suck her heavenly mounds.
Here, i always search beta since English is my second language. I hope than you like this teaser.
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I prefer Revenge of Uchiha, it's a very good idea for the plot.
I hope than you write this. Good luck
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Ok, so I've decided to finally give writing porn a try rather then just throwing out requests. Its going to be a combo of the School years(voldemort) scenario and the Malfoy Affair here with both Hope and Lily being seduced by Malfoy. It will most likely be a 3-shot at best and while most likely not a masterpiece Ill certainly give it my best shot. It'll probably take me a month or so to get it posted as I want to just get it all posted at the same time so be patient. I'll keep it posted as to how its coming along so please don't ask every 2 days how its coming as that annoys the hell out of me and I'm never then one on the receiving end of that question.
Also, I really have no knowledge of what a lot of the abbreviations for stuff are so if someone could point me in the right direction that would be appreciated.
You have my support Spartan, I look forward to reading what you gonna write. And how Draco will pervert Lily and Hope? Potion, curse, seduce? James is alive (i prefer) and who is the boyfriend of Hope (if she has one)? Voldemort take a significant part of the fic (The-girl-who-lived defeated by Draco) ? what relationship will it between Draco, Lily and Hope? (Domination, lover or not (Draco which sees in the two witch just a way to increase his status or the sexual gratification)). Good luck.
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It's going well, I am currently block on a scene. But my writing rhythm returns with the end of holydays. I work on other fic for giving me ideas on this challenge. And seen as we go, the chapter will exceed 20,000 words. And after, I must translate chapter, if someone wanted correc me, it would be nice.
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http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600104866, Now that's what I call research! of katsuyo
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Thank you to everyone, I read a lot of interesting idea (particulary that or Tsunade is the doctor of Kushina).
I had a period when I was on break, but I began again to write. I have written over 10,000 words and it remains to complete the lemon, then a scene of Naruto sissification with Kushina will shave, dress ...Naruto. The chapter may finish this week or in two weeks...
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Necrohunter15, I reverse to my statement at the relationship between Naruto and Kushina.
I am about to write the dialogues before lemon with Naruto and... Kushina became an bastard with her son, I'll call it... hard love. If you know, think of the relationship of Miya/Seo from Sekirei (kushina humiliates, denigrates, dominates sexually her son)
She loves Naruto, and the relation mother/son is...twisted.
P.S: I look for a beta, please.
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The first one, this is a fic where he is an entry examen for go to the school, harry make vampire friend... and he specialize in blood magic for boost his body?
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Daughters of goblin slaves is a referance to the canon girls that are daughters of the goblin slaves. For example, Andromeda, Lily, Narcissa, and if you add them Lunas mom and the Greengrass sisters mom could be goblin slaves, and three have daughters while the two aons could be genderbent.
As for hybrids, Im pretty sure I wrote this aleeady, but my head canon is that humans, goblins, giants, etc are different species and require a ritual or potion of some kind to impregnate the others, with the exception of the Veela. The goblins aren't going to bother doong this because that means the slave is out for several months.
Ok, but the girl isn't obligatory out for several months, a ritual for boost the birth, maybe? (for example, 9 month become 3)
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Who would she be married? (an OC (an old pervert man, a shinobi, the son of daimyo) Sasuke...)
the cheat of her husban is know by Konoha? (but she tries to hide this for avoid shame)
Her husband humiliate her but he abuses her (force to have sex with his friend, take photo when she is in shower, she masturbates and sell and shows them...)?
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Kyuubi has several forms? (Full gigantic fox, human form, hanyou form...)
Kushina can be trapped in the seal and forced to see her daugther become a cumbucket for Kyuubi, Naruko can be an all female team (Hinata and Ino as team mate and Kurenai as sensei)
Naruko can use Kage bunshin forallow Kyuubi to interact with the world, for example he posing as a civilian or a academy student...
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I read the fic with Tonks and Kreacher and i love it, but i prefer your idea with the goblin.
For the dick i understand that you as other people you don't like this or tired this. Personally i prefer big dick.
I love your idea for the detention or that Luscius see his wife gang-banged, but no need to obliviated or kill him, you can imprison him in the goblin donjon where he see his wife serve the gobelin.
I think that gobelin can become student at Hogwart, because the gobelin can corrupt Fudge with gold and Dumbledore want a veritable peace between wizard and other race, it's perfect for him. And i think that it's good for the scenario, the reader follow goblin and how they corrupt the witches in Hogwart.
You talk of daughter of goblin slave, the witches can become pregnant of goblin, they can become pregnant of other races (centaur, dragon, orc...)?
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I was mainly thinking that the timeline should be before Naruto is born making Fugaku the father of Menma from the Naruto movie Road to Ninja. That does not mean that I wouldn't like to read the storyline you came up with sneaky666, though I am curious why you would make Kushina a waitress since that seems to come out of nowhere to me. I am looking forward to seeing the second chapter of "The Unforgettable Escort Mission of Uzumaki Kushina" so do not worry about it okay.
Also this challenge is not just for one person since I would like to see what different authors would do with this premise in mind. Besides some people start and never finish so the more people who write it the more likely that we will see a completed story.
To be honest this is the first idea that came to me. She could have been cooker, secretary... but with my scenario, it seemed the most logical choice for maximize interactions between the characters. But if Memna isn't born... she is on holidays ! For...try to have time with her husband. But, since he has no time for her, and her holidays are long. She willed work a few for avoid doing nothing. I think is a good pretext?
Obviously this is not for one person, and i hope that an other author take this request.
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Thank you! but sorry, 15 years and younger is too young for me to write or think about and even if they were a couple years older I don't think I could make it work. Still, I'm sure someone will take it for you
Thank you for your encouragement and i hope you still write us good fic.
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"sleep in sasuke's bed" is what i meant
The idea is good, i take
seconded on that. thanks sneaky. challenges on this site usually never get picked up.
I know, i have posted request myself but never written, that's why I started to write. And when I'm blocked on my chapters, i watch the request that are a good inspiration and i hope that you like i'll write.
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I love idea and i hope that someone write this, but why no pregnant sex? You don't like this?
You can add the mother of Daphne Greegrass for add the Greengrass girls, add Vector and Sinistra like this the King has spy in the Hogwart teacher.
You can talk of tension between the wizard and gobelin and Fudge for to ease tensions allow young gobelin for go at Hogwart as student (male, son of witch). They are break more witch (Tracey Davies, Cho Chang, Hannah Abbot, Katie Bell...)
'Please keep the dicks shorter than 7 inches' Ok, sorry i do the dick, but for centaur, dragon, or the tentacle of Kaken and other race with a high probability have a large dick compared to human?
I hope really thant someone take the request, especially that we feel you've put there a lot of reflexion and than you want this writen;
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Looking at my stories, I've made Amelia Bones a rapist, Flitwick a necrophile, Luna a lesbian, McGonagall a student seducer, Harry a secret glory holer, Draco an enslaver and Hermione a dog fucker. And only the Flitwick thing has any kind of subtext in canon. Maybe.
As such, I fear that I've done more than many to propogate the sort of terrible PWP stories that shit all over the HP characters, settting, and plots.
In HP fanfic terms - I'm a monster. I do things in the setting that make no possible sense. My muse was so disgusted they packed up and went off around the world for eight months, and then came back and forced me to write a second person story. And even I wasn't able to work out how the "big butt, big breast" requirement could possibly work in a story that involves "femHarry" "in the first year" in a "brothel". It's like the OP is the only pedophile in the world who doesn't remember what the other 11 year olds looked like when they were a kid. Maybe the character could be played by one of the ladies linked in thebooblover's always entertaining and sometimes quite scary requests.
Still, as long as readers and writers are happy I suppose the "Don't like, Don't read" mantra makes a lot of sense. I always like to suggest it for any stories likely to cause distress, although sadly I still have English majors emailing me in tears over my grammar and complete lack of understanding of the vocative comma, which I thought was a Brooklyn low-fi band.
Possibly the best way to protest unliked requests is to make liked requests, or write liked stories, or support liked authors doing the proper-in-character-canon-compliant smut with concrit, or other comments. Positivity is more effective than negativity! Which is why I, as a negative asshole, never achive much of anything and instead just complain about stuff that pisses me off on the internet all the time. Like magusfang. That guy... *shakes fist* I kid... I kid... or do I?
For the big butt and big breast, i talk when Harry have fifteen, or Tonk, or Fleur (and is optionnal). Before we can be increased the age of acceptance at Hogwart. And why you talk of bashing? There is no need, Dumbledore is a human, so he make error (read the book and reflect on the consistency of the scenario) and it's a PWP than i propose, not a complex story.
Guest_Guest, You rails against this kind of fic, but it is thousands fic of happy sex, romance... i can understand you like that, myself if the fic is well written i like that (EuphemiaXLelouch or KanekiX Rize than i love), but PWP like that are very rare in comparaison, it's bad wanting porno sometimes? Like say JayDee, don't like, don't read
And JayDee, i love Amelia Bones like a rapist, this a character too little use and your fic is very good and if you intersted in the request I would be really happy if you muse isn't too disgusted.
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The request look very nice. but what timeline? Naruto and co are born? How old are they?
I have interested in the request, but i have a lot of work right now. A lot of chapter in work and unfinished, the chapter two of the unforgettable escort mission of Kushina and an other request therefore i don't write this before a long time.
Too bad, when i read the request i have already the chapter in the head : During the valentine, Kushina expected have a date with Minato. But Minato too busy with his job of Hokage is unavailable. Kushina going work at her job as a mother, she no longer wishes to work as Kunoichi, but will not stand idly at home), her job is waitress in a luxury restaurant. During her job, she see Mikoto have a date with Fugaku. She is surprised by te slutty dress of her friend. In the evening, she is more and more surprised by the behavior of Mikoto which acts as a submissive and obedient whore, and by Fugaku that grabs her buttocks, breasts, made her derogatory remarks like she is a slut for Uchiha... Kushina become more and more horny and at the end of evening, she follows Mikoto and Fugaku at the toilet and sees having sexual relationships, Mikoto then asked her to join for a threesome in the toilet.
An idea is Kushina sees her girl (Naruko) having a date with Sasuke than act lihe his father with Naruko, at the beginning, Kushina discreetly tries to separate them but it makes things worse. And during the threesome, she sees Naruko lost her virginity at Sasuke and become a whore. (the father and the son are in competition).
Blood Prison
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Interesting. You have references idea for the fetishes and others plot, twist ?