Samara

thanks to god ... the aftershocks had stepped.. no major casualties happened.. just few cracks in the walls are to be repaired.. thank you guys.. and I don't think my post will go vacant any time soon..

thanks to god ... the aftershocks had stepped.. no major casualties happened.. just few cracks in the walls are to be repaired.. thank you guys.. and I don't think my post will go vacant any time soon..

thanks to god ... the aftershocks had stepped.. no major casualties happened.. just few cracks in the walls are to be repaired.. thank you guys.. and I don't think my post will go vacant any time soon..

Nope, just writing a fun scene, then two more scenes and viola...already have 6k plus written

Think of it as a really bad disney ride...

I guess that adds a whole new meaning to shake it up baby, huh? Hope you & your's are safe Samara, keep us posted. Bet it didn't postpone your exams though, huh?

still waiting for new chapter.. if possible don't sacrifice any one.. just give us the hints about the new bad guyz..
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still waiting for new chapter.. if possible don't sacrifice any one.. just give us the hints about the new bad guyz..
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Have 9k written...trying to decide who to sacrifice to the cliffhanger...

still waiting for new chapter.. if possible don't sacrifice any one.. just give us the hints about the new bad guyz..
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I know magus that you are trying to update soon. but what can I do your cliffhangers are killing me.. so I keep bugging.. and about the whips.. can't say anything.. if you don't post the next chapter soon .. I just might. a little . .. ha ha.. ( you guys are so funny )

I know magus that you are trying to update soon. but what can I do your cliffhangers are killing me.. so I keep bugging.. and about the whips.. can't say anything.. if you don't post the next chapter soon .. I just might. a little . .. ha ha.. ( you guys are so funny )

I am a bit confused while reading. Can we have a back story about Cat. she is a little girl like the twins but damn intelligent and super talented. according to the story Max's dad was a prize scientist,who died due to his powerful inventions.so Max's scary intelligence is understandable. and cat seems as intelligent as him. so I think a back story plot abut cat's family and history will be damn interesting. thou you can tell me about it in here also. you see I'm really curious to know. what say magus

(third attempt at posting on this chapter. WTF?)I just wonder how the bro could watch Max & Co. if the flyers knocked everyone out, is he a mutant? Now as for Stace & Kara, I am mixed. It could be that it was a friendly kiss in girl kissing friend Hello & Kara misunderstood. Now Stace is appalled and we go to bad dream for her or she looks at Kara with surprise and after awhile embraces her saying it's about time. But when she finds out Max et al is behind it she wants nothing to do with them. I think Stacy's family is a good solution but first they have to turn their gang around. (Kara points out that the Dickheads had pissed off Max and just maybe they might want to be on his good side.) Kara's parents just disappear and May arranges with Alice's help that most of the $$$ is placed into a Trust for Kara at 21-25. The rest is put into the current school's operating fund unavailable to be touched by the board.

Damn hangers!.. OK now we have 2 damaged alfabit ops about to undergo interrogation that they probably won't survive and 2 scumbags that should never walk free. Maybe Kare should be the one to punish the scumbags that were her parents. That could be interesting like Evan.
As far as the comments on Petra I don't see her as taking over. Yes she is unusual BUT so is your story. I think you have done an excellent job of weaving interpersonal relationships into a thrilling story. Stay the course and FULL SPEED AHEAD.

Yep...its up. GITG 59. Looks like two more chapters and on to book three
We get to play with the Turners next chapter

Magus
You and your family have a Happy Easter. The love of my life wanted the Fifty Anniverisary of the Sound of Music for Easter and I got it for her with a dozen roses. She got teary eye because she said that she did not get anything for me and I told her she gave me her hand and soul in marriage 34 yrs ago and in July it will be 35 yrs.

This is to all the followers of Magus.
Hope that you and your families have a very Happy Easter.

Probably tommorow late, working on opening the pool today...haven't got much writing done.

perhaps....some interesting things coming out of the pods perhaps

You're very welcome

I admit that I am over sixty but my dad use to say that you are only as old as you feel and I feel really young. I admit that I have seen things in my life that has scared me sometimes and did things that would have scared other people but like I told Magius, if i could do it over again I would if it meant makeing someone elses life better. I please my wife everyday by doing things for her just because I want to.

When he wrote BITG it was on the site that we do not mention here and the only way to leave him comments was in the reviews of each chapter. Move the book to this site when the other started inforcing stupid rules to just certain writers. When he moved both books here he set up this forum for us to talk to him on a daily bases. We can still write to him through the reviews of the chapters. And yes he does like us to give him some feedback. Like he says, if he likes the suggestions he will steal them from you. Also we know when he was recovering from injuries from his job because we would read a chapter and say WTF. Where was his head when he wrote that part. We would comment and he would thank us and inform us that he took our comments to heart and would see about making the changes. So it does not hurt to ask him questions about the story because sometimes he gets the characters mixed up and we let him know that certain people can not be in two places at the same time. So keep reading and asking the questions.

No worries, I like the questions, helps to ort out characters in my mind. In fact people have found quite a few errors for me, I was recovering from surgery when I wrot BITG so there were a few confusing moments in there. Plus I really like the suggestions, I use them more than people think, had some really good ideas from readers - such as letting Jane become Amy and Alices little girl, thanx for that one by the way
And I'm glad you like the story, I know it's a little rough in places but most readers said they'd rather I write more than I edit so I've missed a few things along the way. Besides I like writing so much more than edditing