Churn

Awesome! I'm looking forward to both! And yes, I saw the third chapter, it's currently my favorite in the entire story! Ignore the rating and votes on your stories, it's the reviews that count. Shura may not have a bunch now of reviews now, but it will gain more as time goes on.

Is that your OC for Bleach? That sounds fucking awesome. How could anyone here not be into that? Kubo himself is hardly politically correct, so where would the hate come from? Since you have multiple stories going, I'm guessing you'll be updating them cyclically? Still waiting for more Shura stuff. ;P

You need to continue that story with futa Sheeva, shit was sexy! XD Would love to see a Sheeva/Kintaro/Goro thing from you. Will it be in the same universe as your previous Sheeva story? On the topic of the beginning I just got one piece of advice; when in doubt "in media res". If you aren't happy with the end result you can still salvage it by pasting on a beginning that "fades" into the climax; without the need to retool the entire damn beast. If that makes any sense.