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  1. World of Warcraft: Diplomacy

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    Author: Redfields
    Title: Diplomacy
    Summary: As the Night Elves and the nation of Theramore begin a diplomatic relationship, Tyrande Whisperwind and Jaina Proudmoore begin a much more erotic one. A futa dryad and a gnome are introduced later.
    Feedback: Always appreciated
    Fandom: Games - World of Warcraft
    Pairing: Jaina / Tyrande / horse / Futa Dryad / gnome
    Warnings: 3Plus Anal Beast DP FF Fingering FD OC Oral Other Solo Toys
    Solo story or chaptered story: 4 chapters.
    URL: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600090173

    This is my first story with any beastiality in it (chapters two and three, and sort of four), so I'd appreciate any feedback on that or anything else. Hope you enjoy it.

  3. The Principal's Punishment

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    Author: Redfields
    Title: The Principal’s Punishment
    Summary:  A futa principal has to punish some mildly misbehaving preteens.
    Feedback: Any feedback is appreciated, although I tend to enjoy positive feedback more.
    Fandom: Original
    Pairing: young boy, young girl, futa
    Warnings:  3Plus Anal DP FD Fingering HJ MF Minor1 Oral Rim
    Solo story or chaptered story: 3 Chapters
    URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108403

     

    I know what you’re thinking “Redfields, an original story? Get back to Futa-Shep!” I’ll try, but I had the idea for this story bouncing around my head (based off some inspiration from Shadbase and Gif Author), and I figured the best way to get it out of my head would be to write it down. So here you go, and thanks for reading. I’ll try and get back to actual fan-fiction now.

  4. Redfields Review Replies

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    Reviews for The First Lady’s Support. There was only one, but it was a doozy.

    From ANON - quinnfabraysmut on August 25, 2016

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    Excellent concept, and some of this is very hot.

    A couple of pieces of constructive feedback:

    1. Build more heat and mood. Build the electricity.

    2. Ainsley should become more turned on and want more. Instead, when the First Lady comes in, she's thinking, ok I've gone this far to get my support. It shouldn't be primarily about support anymore.

    3. Less anal, more pussy.

    4. This shouldn't be the first time for any of them.

    5. You should avoid clincal and pure mechanical phrasing. I don't care precisely how long the dildo is or how "slightly" it tapers.

     

    Man, all I wanted was Teri Polo opening a set of french doors wearing nothing but a giant strapon dildo.

    Anyway, responding point by point.

    1. I usually do more build, but this time I was trying for a more ‘porn-y’ vibe, where the characters have sex for the slightest of reasons.
    2. Ainsley’s in the “I’d do anything for an A’ schoolgirl role type thing. It’s something she’ll keep in mind, even if she does like the sex.
    3. I’m into anal. That’s what I like, so that’s what I’ll write.
    4. It wasn’t the first time for any of them. I thought I made that clear in the writing, but maybe not.
    5. Sometimes massive just means realistically big. I wanted massive to be cartoonishly big, so I added dimensions to give readers a precise idea.

  5. Redfields Review Replies

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    I didn’t know where to reply to reviews for my stories, then the mods pointed me here. So thanks! I hope I formatted this all properly.

    Anyway, the review for Castle: Alexis’s Day Off. Chapter One posted in August, Chapter Two in October, when most of the reviews came in.

     

    From Oric13 on August 05, 2016

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    Short but sweet. And very erotic.

    Thanks, Dude!

    From ANON - Caskett95 on August 16, 2016

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    Great story, I like a dirty and horny Alexis. How about a chapter with Kate who caught Alexis?

    Thanks. I had no plans to actually write a second chapter, but an idea came to mind, and I eventually got around to writing it.

    From MTL on October 13, 2016

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    Loved chapter 2. It's so freaking hot to imagine little Alexis Castle butt fucking Kate Beckett. Would love some more of that. Or better yet Beckett returning the favour and taking Alexis's anal cherry. Either way would love to read more about these two having an ultra-forbidden affair.

    Praise from the master! I’ve been reading and loving your work for a while now, so it means a lot that you read and enjoyed mine. Sadly, Alexis doesn’t have an anal cherry left, since she was too eager to take it herself. I may get to more chapters later.

     

    From quinnfabraysmut on October 13, 2016

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    More Alexis and Kate, please!!!!

    Play up the teenage part, and make it as dirty as possible.

    Erase all the guilt. Kate should just go to town on Alexis's body, fuck her for all she's worth, relishing in the fact that she's 15 and gorgeous.

     

    More? I’ll try, but there are other stories I’d like to finish. Kate’s a cop, so she’ll always feel guilty about doing something so illegal. Alexis is the one that’ll probably take charge in the relationship.

    From ANON - TobyB on October 14, 2016

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    Hey I love this story it's great is there any chance we could get a part three where Beckeett is the submissive willingly (maybe even a slave) and Alexis is the Dom maybe at Beckett place where Alexis has got Beckett to buy alot of BDSM toys (strap-ons,plugs, whips a collar) you uses her for her pleasure and Becketts (Because she served Alexis).

    I think this would be a good story because there a lot Kate as Dom but I've never seen a Alex as dom. Maybe get another of the other women Alexis' sub maybe how lanie get taken as Alexis'sub 

    I would love to help you develop this if you decide to add to this I don't know if you already have a beta but if you need any help you can contact me at  [Redacted]

     

    I’m not into BDSM or Dom/Sub, so it probably won’t be showing up in any of my stories. I doubt I’d be able to write it well anyway. Alexis would take charge, but it’d be more of an alpha/beta personality thing than a dom/sub or master/slave thing. That said, if this is the kind of stuff you like, you should absolutely write it, since it seems like it would have a large audience here.

    From ANON - shrike on October 14, 2016

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    I look forward Hayley eating the "strawberry tart", also Alexis's encounters with her babysitter Rina (Katrina) Say Teaching Alexis, Reconnecting during "Inventing the Girl"

    And of course after Paige gets to drunk Alexis decides she needs to be punished

     

    Haley shows up, like, seven years after this story takes place. I think I’d rather not do any time skips. However, again, if you like these ideas, write them yourself and post them here. We’d all love to read them.

     

    Thanks for all the kind reviews. I have the inkling of another chapter in mind, but some other things I’d like to finish first.

  7. Skyhold Love and Lust (Dragon Age)

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    Thought I'd have a go at writing some F/F fiction for one of my favorite games of 2014. I tried to make it period specific, and to adhere to the characters' personalities, but I'm not sure if I got that right.

    Author: Redfields
    Title: Skyhold Love and Lust
    Summary: A number of female characters in Dragon Age: Inquisition pair off to have some fun.
    Feedback: Appreciated. I might not take your advice, but I'd like it.
    Fandom: Games->Dragon Age Origins (actually Inquisition)
    Pairing: Sera-Vivienne, Cassandra-Inquisitor (Female Mage Qunari), Dagna-Harding, Leliana-Morrigan, Josephine-Hawke
    Warnings: Anal, F/F, Fingering, Oral, Rim, Toys.
    Solo story or chaptered story: Solo for now. Maybe a second chapter later
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