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  2. The Flightless (Original)

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    Author: R-E-D-xX
    Title: The Flightless
    Summary: Crow a once-orphaned boy due to an accident finds himself moving to the city stealing from cars when he runs into a mysterious tall man in his late thirties. What will happen next? 
    Feedback: Yes, always please <3
    Fandom: Original / Drama – Slash

    Warnings: AFFO Anal Angst D/s Humil Inc M/s OC Rape
    Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered story
    URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107390

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  3. The Flightless - Reviews

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    So this is a first for me, I should have done this A LONG TIME AGO, but I forgot to and ya so here I am. Thank you again for everyone who has reviewed Flightless so without further a due, here are my responses to your love!

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    From MaddamAndRobin on March 31, 2015

    You are doing great for your first story. Keep after it and you'll keep improving. It's rough around the edges, but that's easily fixed with someone to help you edit. Reading a lot will help you too. Thanks for sharing your story. Xoxo Robin
     

     

    thank you so much robin! It’s been hard making sure that all is in order. But I am very happy and glad that you are enjoying the chapters and story as it evolves! And I was going to find someone but with having a growing family at your feet its just easier to try and do it yourself, ya know?? 

     

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    From Gin on November 12, 2014

    I really love your story. Please update soon :)

     

     

    I know this is extremely late in reply Gin! But I do try to post every month or 4 weeks to update. Though the last two years I did kinda fall off the earth so I do apologize for the long wait! But there are new updates now! :D

     

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    From RolyaNine on October 12, 2014

    I wasn't sure I'd like it but I was strangely intrigued, I'm a sucker for unusual plots and characters so i really like this one, Crow is an interesting character you really feel for him and everything he's been through I feel like he just needs a loving hug :). I was worried when I go to the "sexual" parts because the adult stories I've read are just gross and written just to be well for shock value and nothing else backing it but that. This story did it correct you have good balance it's not just focused on the physical aspects of sex/rape but also the emotions that come along with it so it's more tolerable for the reader to be disturbed but to also invest in the character. Really nice story!

    This actually means the world to me! Thank you so much, and I do try to mix in every element possible with what goes on in The Flightless. I didn’t want it to be a bland and cut dry story where you didn’t get to feel what was going on. But I was also trying to make sure I didn’t go over the top which i may have done a few times lol.  but i am very glad that you found a seat at the awkward trials of this story. Thank you for the lovely review! 

     

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    From ANON - Mona Thompson on October 08, 2014

    I really love this story! I like how it has me on an emotional roller-coaster...the humor is subtle and well placed too. The writing technique you use is amazing. The way you explain things...I can picture everything in my head perfectly. Im excited to see where you take us with this so keep up the updates and thank you for sharing your talent with us :)

    I try very hard to enable both humor, sadness, fear and a mixture of other emotions into my writing. It may not be the best of the best, I know I have some ‘quickfingers’ that I will need to fix. But I’m very happy to see that you were able to picture the scenes as they were being read! That really makes me happy as someone else who ‘as they read’ see’s the scenes depicted in my head as I read. :D

     

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    From ANON - S to the Z on October 08, 2014

    I really like the pacing you have, the variety between action and developmental scenes where we get to know more about Crow's backstory and the characters around him, all whilst general events keep moving. Thumbs up! ;D

    This here reader is intrigued! Looking forward to seeing what's up next. Hopefully Crow gets some TLC!

    Hello! And yes the pacing I try to moderate at a level to keep everyone seated – i hope i did well? It makes me happy that someone is eager/loving to see or view the back history of each character! And I can assure you soon down the road of the Flightless Indris will be having his own moment ;} Thank you for the thumbs up! And yes ahha soon – very very soon crow will be in the throws of where or what he needs to decide in choosing to stick with. But for now, starts the dramallama ahha.

  5. Reviews..

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    Okay so i love reviews and all that , like i really do but i have some things that just erk my nerves from the reviews I get on the way I do my chapters. I know you see it as a tease when i put my next chapter with a small preview summary and then a COMING SOON. I do that because I want people to get a sneak peak. Its no way rude at all of me to do that. And I've done that on other sites for my stories and I see nothing bad about it.

    Now ALSO regarding the fact about me saying this in the shout box and then having another reviewer say im rude for what i said? no hun, I am not rude reviews should be for reviewing the novel not to say other things, but again your allowed you own voice so I can't say anything about it. But frankly saying something and then RE SAYING what the previous reviewer said makes it seem like im the bad guy when im not. And i didn't say anything wrong about Rukia at all, all i was upset was the chat speak (which i have a huge distaste for) and how they were upset on how i was doing MY story pages.

    but yes, again sorry if someone thought it was upsetting on me doing that with my next chapters, but i've always done that with my stories. Sorry but thats just how i do them.

    done venting.

  7. The Flightless

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    Author: R E D-xX
    Title: The Flightless
    Summary: Crow a once orphaned boy due to a accident finds himself moving to the city stealing from cars when he runs into a mysterious tall man in his late thirties. What will happen next?
    Feedback: Feedback and constructive criticism much appreciated.
    Fandom: Original
    Pairing: N/a
    Warnings: AFFO,Anal,Angst,D/s,Humil,Inc,M/s,OC
    Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered story
    URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107390

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