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I think your original title was probably more in line with the story. Snakes vs shadows.
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@DA I like your new graphics.
Now let him go long enough to get a new chapter posted.

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So very unMax like. Come in DA let's have another chapter either his or yours.
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The major already said he needed to contact "control". Obviously "they" are a small group of a larger organization.
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Ha ha...nope, I'lll never tall who that is but it looks like she'll be earning her wings soon

It changes periodically

Are you sure about the part of your anatomy in her grasp?

So very unMax like. Come in DA let's have another chapter either his or yours.
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Right, Jack wasn't merely upset that he went two days without sex (if he thinks that's bad, wait unil he's married!), but why he didn't get any - Kayla said she wasn't interested! That may have never happened before.

DA Why don't you get your own either by getting him to post another chapter OR posting a nice long CH2 of your own?
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I've been trying but Max and crew are not cooperating...thats right I just passed the buck to make believe people

Nah, he just pointed . I'm a bad teacher, neglecting the gold stars
I don't get to use that one much either . Can you imagine, "Mommy mommy, Look I got a gold star!"

he's going pretty good here, lot of quiet grumbling though...he's a little weird when he writes

You probably will get a gold star if you post! C'mon Magus you are killing me! You have me reading some old stories and books; everything I can get my hands on! It seems as if all the writers I follow have writers block. Feels like collusion sometimes! Either that or I read the stories too fast after they are posted. Mrs. M, can you tickle him for me and see if anything 'drop' out, like a post! Thanks.

We are both special. I got a gold star from her and the old fart award from you. The reason thatvi say we are both special is that we have the best people in the world to cuddle up to. I just brought her home from our dinner date and now I am going to cuddle with her and start getting her eye better.
The reason that I think both if us are special is that they stick with us when we think we are 21 year old kids and think that we can still go out and do what we did I in our younger life and they nurse us back to health even when they threaten to kick our butts doing it.
Now like I said I am going to cuddle with my lovely SO, you do the same with your girls and I will talk with both later. Will be awaiting newer chapters from both of you. Like I stated before now have to great writers from the same family to follow.

as requested, i have poked magus in the ribs and told him to get writing and we will ensure he stays on task, mostly.

aww thanks sniper, god i was so nervous when i posted it! thanks for all the nice comments though

DA loved your story. Now have two writers in this family to keep track of new chapters to their stories. Keep up the great work.

Author: DirtyAngel
Title: Coices
Summary: Carrie is looking for love and someone who just makes her happy. She thinks she finds what she is looking for with an older woman but there is a secret between them that could destroy it all
Feedback: Yes please :
Fandom: Originals Slash F/F and threesomes
Pairing: N/A
Warnings: F/F, angst, fing, oral, three, mast, voy
Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered
URL: http://original.adul...hp?no=600107816

i know right? but he does look good doing it

It is like DA stated that we men think we are 21 year old children. My wife told me when I got back from my last run with the company that involved two new marks on my body that I was not a spring chicken but a lovable old dart and I needed to start living for the rest of the family. She also said that I had a butt beating coming from her for the new wounds and she did not mean on my body but her and The family's hearts and souls. I told her I was looking forward to it. Again welcome back angeldust.

Obviously not. Witness jumping out of perfectly good aircraft AND at his age !!

Sounds like the chapter is basically done. Soooo when will he/you post it??
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haven't you be listening, we are all a little nuts here. the leaders are the worst ones, if not for there families we would really be in trouble.

To that idea, I say: NEIGH!
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:bugle starts playing: CHARGE!