Hundybuns

Hey guys give the boss a break, Sunday is his birthday and deserves to have some Magusfang time. At least until Monday. Anyway happy birthday on Sunday boss and have fun.

Great chapter. Can not wait for the next one. Just remember that if you rebuild RED to include puncture resistant tires on it. That way the whole car will be bullet proof. Kick ass in the next chapter. Can not wait to see what type of aircraft he has designed to take him and the girls to Canada in. Will be waiting the newer chapters of the other two stories also. Well until the next chapter is released I will go back to reading other stories on this site. There are some good writers on this site. I try to ready stories that have more than one chapter to them because it gives me more iinsight of the writer. One chapter written years ago and nothing more from the writer means they got put off by the reviews. I sorry agree with you about not leaving a story unfinished. I have read stories on other site that are good but all of a sudden they just end and never completed. Like some of the stories on this sight that are tagged WIP and nothing has been done to the story since 2009. That is not a WIP that is an uncompleted story. Well I vented enough. Will keep waiting for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Dang, that chapter went by quick. I finished it and thought, "That's it?". I really got sucked in and didn't want to stop reading. Great job, ya fook! Now get BUSY on the next one. I'm dying to see what happens next. I feel like a kid watching one of those 1930's or 40's Saturday matinee movie serials that came on before the main feature.

Well that wasn`t too bad. I guess that I can get used to May and Rick as long as you keep Marge and The girls away from Rick.

Yeah I know what you mean. I hate when women get hurt whether its physical or emotional. I started to read a series on the old site called Broken Birds. It is about women who have been abused and I must have stopped reading it 20to 25 times until I finally finished it.
It turned out to be a very good series. So I guess I will try to continue reading this series doing what I do by skipping spots I really hate. To Magus please whatever you do, don`t get Marge or the girls together with Rick. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE. It is bad enough that May has left.

Yeah I have a fan fiction I started back in the 90s but never finished as my daughter out grew HP.
Here's a link to a story that I had started to post here, let me know what you think.
http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107333

Myself I hope it is not Amy, Alice, Marge or May as they are all part of the original family and have special meanings to the story. Just my hope.