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The only thing I am sad about is when all the books are finished what am I going to read. Hopefully it won't be too soon.

WOW, that's almost all I can say except thank you. This is something I have been waiting to happen for a long time. I thought for sure that you would have Hans do something to spoil the wedding (I was waiting for one of your quirky twists). Again I just want to say thank you and I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

One thing I really love about your stories Magnus is the way it brings people to discuss them. I know I have given my opinions from time to time but your stories are so good that we ( I mean your loyal readers) have to discuss them. I hope you don't go by Angeldust's suggestion that you kill Cat. I kjnow she is only new to the story but she fits in with the twins so good. As for the new chapters take your time and do your usual excellent job on both Girls and Northstar.

What short term memory. I lost most of mine years ago, that's why I got confused so easily. Oh well good excuse to read it multiple times.

Excellent, just two little complaints. A couple of places I had to reread to realize the story shifted. Other than that I loved it. Of course I really like all your stories.

I was just thinking the same thing. Everything seems to be going great, so something has got to give. Or maybe Magus is going to have everything work out for a change. Not everything has to end bad, it would be nice for a change to one of general Amy's plans work to perfection. Well we will all have to wait and see. By the way Magus great chapter.

Hi, There is one character that seems to be somewhat pushed into the background. I mean Amy. If you look back through both series you will find she is very important. She was Max's second gilrfriend after Emma. She always seemed to start all love sessions. After Max saved the girls from the rabid dog and was recovering in the hospital she was the first of the girls Maxdiddled to an orgasim. Whwn Mike called saying he wouldn't be home for Amy's birthday she is the one to suggest that Alice trace the call. She also named the house Jeeves. After Max found out Amy was dieing she is was instrumental in getting Marge to change her mind about Emma, Amy and Max having full blown sex. Amy was the one to get the mothers to join Max's harem. She convinced Max and June to make a baby together. Amy was the main reason that the "Four" went to school. Amy basically the reason that Becca joined the family along with Suzi. But lately it seems that Amy as well as Alice seem to be pushed into the background. I love how you have paired them all up but, Magus I really wish that you would bring Amy and Alice closer to Max, Emma and Marge. Now with bitchpriest trying to push a wedge between Amy/Alice and Max/Emma please let Max realize what is going on and get closer again to Amy and Alice. This is just my observations and wishes. As you can probably see I am a hopeless romantic.

Excellent as usual. I won't say much more until others have read it. I will say I really, really enjoyed it. Thank you.

I remember that. That was a good section of the series. Too bad it didn't last a little longer. The four of them just acting like teenagers in love. Don't mind me its just the romantic coming out in me. I like the action but I really like the family time. Not just the bed time but the bunch of them just interacting and having fun.

Well I hope in your planned third book you at least keep the original six characters together along with their kids. Just hoping.

No, what I mean is it looks like the priest is trying to drive a wedge between Max and Amy/Alice by saying that Max doesn't really love them. As for what Angeldust suggests that Marge get her own man, I hope not. Not just for the fact that Marge and Max have Cindy together together but there seems to be a love there that goes way back. Anyway that's my look at things for now, except Magus you really have a way of getting people talking about your stories.

Sorry guys can't wait I have to ask Magus a question. Is the old priest just trying to stir up crap or is this the way the story is going to head. I hope not. I will say more later don't want to mess the chapter up for the rest.

Very good as usual. I would say more but I will wait until others read it and respond. Again excellent job.

Magus you are truly evil. As for your minor mistakes, I blame the beer. Besides we know what you really mean. Keep up the excellent work.

Very good as usual, Girls 21. Don't want to say too much until others can read and make comments.

Well what can I say, but excellent as usual. That bit “She can’t have her baby here - tell her to cross her legs or something…!”, is that from personal experience? Great story as usual. I still can't wait to find out what Marge and May are going to do and say when Max and Emma tell them they are going to have twin babies. Should be fun.

Hey man, not just kids. Some of us have to try and keep you kids in line, right Angeldust?

Which is where? Not that I want to bitch.

Actually I was thinking that one clone working on Girls and another clone working on Northstar. Or one clone sleeping while the other one writes.

Hey Magus maybe you should clone yourself then maybe you could keep your fans happy. Seriously take your time and keep doing your usual great job.

Thanks, guess I will need to get a bigger expansion card for my tablet so I can keep all the chapters together.

Very nicely done as usual. Can't say too much more until everybody else has a chance to read it. By the way have you decide how manychapters this series is lasting?

Cindy is Max and Marge baby girl. Cynthia June Johansson.

Everyone but Marge, Emma, Amy and Cindy.

No problem there you have enough chapters written that it will take time to memorize them waiting for new ones. Keep up the excellent work and take your time.