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I hope not. Marge is supposed to be committed to Max. Magus you have really opened up big can of worms with this chapter. Like who is going to lead the family, Max or his father. How is the meeting between Alice and Cindy going to work out. How is the meeting between David and Rick going to work out. How is David going to react to June being a robot named May. How are David and Cindy going to react to Max having a baby with Marge as well as being married with three more babies on the way. Also how are the twins and Cat going to react to having a grandpa and another aunt. Wow I will be waiting to see what is going to happen. I hope its not going to be the way I think it will work out.

Hi, I just caught your link in Magus' forum and just finished reading your chapters. I have to say excellent work, can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Very nicely done. It was great how you tied everything together about Rick and how Max's father and sister died. I was also glad to see you give Max and Amy some time together as I miss the old times when the four young ones used to get together and have fun. Everything now is a bit confusing with so many characters. Sometimes its hard to remember who is who and with whom. Well keep up the good work. Waiting for the next installment of both Girls and North star.

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Well as good as the Girls chapter was I believe you out did yourself in the North star chapter. There are just nothing I can say that will do justice to it. Maybe it's because there is such a long wait between chapters. Or maybe it's just everyone discusses Girls so much, but I really look forward to any North star chapters. .keep up the excellent work.

The only thing wrong with your deduction Angeldust is Max was home schooled and if it wasn't for Emma and Amy he would have been taking college courses and not going to high school.

Great chapter, I figure the bad guys are holding Mike's parents somewhere and are blackmailing Mike. Either that or Mike has been brainwashed somehow. Waiting patiently for the next chapter. Maybe Max will figure out how to build a force field for his house.

I am not saying that Emma and Petra shouldn't be together, but what I am disappointed in that they were together as a male and a femasle and that Emma let Petra finish in her.

Good chapter except with the bit between Emma and Petra, very disappointed with that. At least Max has a divorce lawyer handy if he wants one. Hopefully that will be the end of any more of that.

Hey people reading your posts are almost as good as reading Magus' stories. I get a big kick out the how weird some of you can be. Keep it going and Magus take it easy and recover.

Very nice change of pace. Also glad your getting better. I like the action, but sometimes I really like the quiet times as well. It gives us time to reflect and just plain have fun. Keep up the good work and please look after yourself.

Take it easy and recover. Don't worry about anything but getting better. We can always guess which way you will go. Again good luck and get bettert.

Well I just hope its not Emma, Marge or Amy.

As always an entertaining chapter. One thing I would like to know, is Amy ever going to have a baby with Max? I would like to see Amy and Alice start to spend more time with Max and Emma like in the old days. Max used to depend on the both of them to help him in the planning of any raids. They seem to be pushed into the background more and more. I kinda miss the banter and wise cracks from Amy to Max. I guess what I am trying to say is there seems to be too many characters. Maybe try to have the original group plus their new others spend more time together and let the others, the newer characters like Rick, Suzi spend their time together. Its just a thought. Any way keep up the good work and I will be patiently waiting for the next chapter of Girls and hopefully North star.

Easy on the keyboard. You break it we get nothing.

WOW what a chapter and what a cliff hanger. Hopefully chapter 28 won't take too long. BTW welcome back. I'll say more after others have read the chapter.

NO. :-)

I know what you mean. I think I have read Boy, Girls and Northstar a couple of times each already.

Wow its been so quiet here lately since Magus went away. I guess everyone is getting their work done so when Magus comes back with a new chapter we can all jump on it.

Just finished chapter 26. Glad to see none of the family was hurt too bad. It looks like you are tying everything together nicely, at the same time opening up some new questions. Like what is Suzi going to do. Waiting patiently for what happens next. Until then have fun.

Take your time and do your usual excellent job.

I don't care as long as it is not Emma, Marge, Amy, Alice, the twins, Cat, Cindy, May or Max.

Naw I think Hans is reading everything being written here and is laughing his head off.

Sorry Magus I spelled your name wrong again. Are you sure you don't want to change it?

Well Magus I can see why you picked this site for your stories, everyone here is crazy (including me). Hey nothing against anyone at other sites but most are a little uptight. Could you see people at the "other site" acting like this?:-) seriously I have looked around at other sites but keep coming back here. At first it was only for Magnus' stories, but now I have started reading others as well. Someday I will get up the nerve to send it some of the stories I have written over the years.