Sniper014

HFS!!! That cliffhanger was truly evil. I rarely yell/curse out loud when I encounter one but I did this time. FANTASTIC chapter. Even the start was brilliant, showing that the teens didn't have a monopoly on drama.

no the older rifles were bolt action. But the 50 caliber berreta and the FAL rifles are semi automatic. That way we do not lose target sighting chambering the next round. When you are sighting a target over a mile away you do not want to lose it having to chamber the next round. Remember his dad was making weapons for the government. Four rifles with 10 rounds per mag is 40 rounds going down range at a time. And if they are smart they would stagger their shots so that they are not all loading at the same time. And if they carry ten mags each that is 400 rounds going down range. Good blood bath and lots of caskets needed.

Magus, enjoy the time with your family. I am sure that they are enjoying the time you spend with them. Just remember that the time will be ending soon and then you can recoop and then get back to your other enjoyments (writing and blowing things up). Keep the faith.

Really people. You mean after reading all the chapters in the series BITG and Northstar and this one GITG you are upset about the girls making out with each other and the young girls that have been rescued by Max and the girls to get upset because they come onto Max and Rick and any other members in the family or house. Get off it. Remember these children have been conditioned to be used by adults for their pleasure. I have not seen any of the adults in these stories go after the girls or children first. In fact they tell the girls that it is not right and that the girls do not have to do this at all. in fact it was Suzy that told Rick to go ahead treat Tess with kindness. Remember Suzy, Becca, Cat, Jazz and Taji and Nadi were all abused by their captives and Max and the family have treated them with love and showing them nothing but love. If you are trying to get Magus in trouble with this site to have him banned by doing a witch hunt on him i suggest that you stop know was banned from one nameless site do to the holier than thou people. Remember this is and Adult site that only allows people 18 year and older on it. We are all adults and I for one like to stories on this site. Sure hate to see Magus banned from this site because now people don't like his writing or you really never read all his stories and are just reviewing this one to start trouble. Magus keep up the good work and I will be waiting for the newer chapters as they are released. The only problem is that I read them so fast that I start reading more stories on this site and other sites waiting for your next chapters. None on the nameless site though.

I like the going home even if there is little or no sex in it. I would like to see more chapters. I lived his life trying to my life back after getting out of the service and no longer working for the letter companies. Keep up the good work. I notice that you used Marge in both Northstar and BITG and GITG stories and Marge in Northstar lost her lover named MAX. Was that just a slip or are you trying to tie two stories together. Like them all and keep the chapters coming.

Great chapter. Can not wait for the next one. Just remember that if you rebuild RED to include puncture resistant tires on it. That way the whole car will be bullet proof. Kick ass in the next chapter. Can not wait to see what type of aircraft he has designed to take him and the girls to Canada in. Will be waiting the newer chapters of the other two stories also. Well until the next chapter is released I will go back to reading other stories on this site. There are some good writers on this site. I try to ready stories that have more than one chapter to them because it gives me more iinsight of the writer. One chapter written years ago and nothing more from the writer means they got put off by the reviews. I sorry agree with you about not leaving a story unfinished. I have read stories on other site that are good but all of a sudden they just end and never completed. Like some of the stories on this sight that are tagged WIP and nothing has been done to the story since 2009. That is not a WIP that is an uncompleted story. Well I vented enough. Will keep waiting for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Great chapter. Can not wait for the next one. Just remember that if you rebuild RED to include puncture resistant tires on it. That way the whole car will be bullet proof. Kick ass in the next chapter. Can not wait to see what type of aircraft he has designed to take him and the girls to Canada in. Will be waiting the newer chapters of the other two stories also. Well until the next chapter is released I will go back to reading other stories on this site. There are some good writers on this site. I try to ready stories that have more than one chapter to them because it gives me more iinsight of the writer. One chapter written years ago and nothing more from the writer means they got put off by the reviews. I sorry agree with you about not leaving a story unfinished. I have read stories on other site that are good but all of a sudden they just end and never completed. Like some of the stories on this sight that are tagged WIP and nothing has been done to the story since 2009. That is not a WIP that is an uncompleted story. Well I vented enough. Will keep waiting for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.