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I would love to but I do not look good with either pink or blue fingernail polish. But then my great granddaughters favorite colors are pink and purple. If I end up wearing either color that means that I lost to a four old.

The ghost never leave. I can not visit the wall in DC without getting chills and tears in my eyes because some of my friends are on it and I know of two that were in the same area with me in the jungle. At least the helmet saved you. I went into the jungle with a soft bush hat on. Helmet made to much noise and was heavy to carry. As much weight that I could leave at the base was fine with me and the others. I usually carried about 140 pounds of equpment on me and if I got shot in the head I would be dead. I have been shot in the arm and leg so I know that it hurts like hell. Like everyone is saying, just remember the ones that you did save. They can go on living. Remember the ones that did not in memory. If you let it tear you up you will never fully recover and then you will be no good to anyone and I believe that you are to good to just give up on life just yet. At 24 you have a lot to live for. As to making the call - some are good calls and some are bad ones but they all have to be done sometimes in our life.
Keep the faith and get well soon.

As always, well done! Love the parts with Stacey and Kara but disappointed you didn't describe their reactions to watching Max and Emma since your descriptions in those scenes are always top notch. Really hoping you're going to include that in the next chapter.
The rest was kinda heartbreaking but really looking forward to Turner getting his just desserts.

Would really hate to see Max release the toys from hell on the enemy. NOT. Bring on the war to protect the family. Do not let Kara's parent off to light.
Also I agree to turn down the testorone on Petria some. Other than that great story and will be looking forward to book three and I agree that the title Snakes in the grass is a great title.

You know that paybacks are hell. That is what happens when you use her to varnish the floor. A heated pool in your area would be better on you abused body.

This is to all the followers of Magus.
Hope that you and your families have a very Happy Easter.

This is to all the followers of Magus.
Hope that you and your families have a very Happy Easter.

Magus
You and your family have a Happy Easter. The love of my life wanted the Fifty Anniverisary of the Sound of Music for Easter and I got it for her with a dozen roses. She got teary eye because she said that she did not get anything for me and I told her she gave me her hand and soul in marriage 34 yrs ago and in July it will be 35 yrs.

This is to all the followers of Magus.
Hope that you and your families have a very Happy Easter.

Okey I know that you and I are good with weapons, but to snap off 20 rounds without adjusting for windage is great. A great outcome to the match is that they tie each other.
As to the Senator, would be neat if he met an accident in prison. They happen every day.
Bury Kara's dad and mom so deep in hell that they never are seen or heard from again.
Now, what is the status of Sarah and Charles telling Max about the Shadow Group. Is that going to be a lead in to the next book.
Keep up the great story telling and will be waiting for the next release.

Me neither.
That is true. Atleast over the hill I can still see sunlight and have fun.

Sorry my error. My computer put the capital A in your name and I did not catch it before it was posted. Did not mean to usurp your name. But you know how us seniors have brain farts due to us being over the hill.

I am younger then you by a year and a half. And I never used mind inducing items . Pain pills only for injuries but stopped them as soon as possible because I did not want them to mess me up. I saw many of my friends get messed up on the drugs. When I missed on the last shot is because I misjudged the wind and heat on the first two shots. The desert in California can do that to a shooter. Corrected and hit the target. I still think it was a lot of luck on the last two shots.

I admit that I am over sixty but my dad use to say that you are only as old as you feel and I feel really young. I admit that I have seen things in my life that has scared me sometimes and did things that would have scared other people but like I told Magius, if i could do it over again I would if it meant makeing someone elses life better. I please my wife everyday by doing things for her just because I want to.

That's alright CL, I'll probably give out awards after every conccusion...
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The Grumpy Old Man Award for Bigman7307
I'll blame the oversight on my apparent skull fracture!
All babies look creepy as hell

I admit that I am over sixty but my dad use to say that you are only as old as you feel and I feel really young. I admit that I have seen things in my life that has scared me sometimes and did things that would have scared other people but like I told Magius, if i could do it over again I would if it meant makeing someone elses life better. I please my wife everyday by doing things for her just because I want to.

When he wrote BITG it was on the site that we do not mention here and the only way to leave him comments was in the reviews of each chapter. Move the book to this site when the other started inforcing stupid rules to just certain writers. When he moved both books here he set up this forum for us to talk to him on a daily bases. We can still write to him through the reviews of the chapters. And yes he does like us to give him some feedback. Like he says, if he likes the suggestions he will steal them from you. Also we know when he was recovering from injuries from his job because we would read a chapter and say WTF. Where was his head when he wrote that part. We would comment and he would thank us and inform us that he took our comments to heart and would see about making the changes. So it does not hurt to ask him questions about the story because sometimes he gets the characters mixed up and we let him know that certain people can not be in two places at the same time. So keep reading and asking the questions.

Rescue 25 my best shot was about 3/4 of a mile. Of course it was a custom rifle with a 10x scope, custom loaded round and a good day. Only hit the target twice that day. The rounds I loaded myself into the brass. I really miss those days. Could not afford it today. At that time the government paid for the ammo and they paid for the rifle and scope.

Like I said you needed to sick the spiders on the school board and the PTA. Need to help the Collins parents with thier son first then see who else on the board and PTA has skeltons in the closet that they do not want to let out.
Bring on Stacey and lets see what her issue is.
Loved the way that he teased the SWAT people over the girls just to see how much they reall loved the girls. Hope that they have a happy life down the road. If not I am sure that Max the master will show them the errors of their existance.
What is the status of the Sahadow Company. And is Sarah and Chuckie going to tell Max what they know or if Jeeves and Alice going to tell Sarah what they found out about the assisans when they downloaded the information about them after the attack on the house.
So many questions and so lttle time before the next book comes out. Will be awaiting the next chapter. And like Rescue 25 said "it you write and release on a daily basis we would get no sleep or work done."
Keep up the great work.

Like I said you needed to sick the spiders on the school board and the PTA. Need to help the Collins parents with thier son first then see who else on the board and PTA has skeltons in the closet that they do not want to let out.
Bring on Stacey and lets see what her issue is.
Loved the way that he teased the SWAT people over the girls just to see how much they reall loved the girls. Hope that they have a happy life down the road. If not I am sure that Max the master will show them the errors of their existance.
What is the status of the Sahadow Company. And is Sarah and Chuckie going to tell Max what they know or if Jeeves and Alice going to tell Sarah what they found out about the assisans when they downloaded the information about them after the attack on the house.
So many questions and so lttle time before the next book comes out. Will be awaiting the next chapter. And like Rescue 25 said "it you write and release on a daily basis we would get no sleep or work done."
Keep up the great work.

Great chapter. I see him helping the Collins and having more allies when he tries to help their son. Also I thoought that MS Crawfords son died in book one from the accident that Max said he should lhave been in. I aslo beleive that we have not seen the last of Turner and Co. But I beleive that the school board is going to look into help Max with Turner just to save their butts.
And I am waiting to see what Amy has in store for Kara and her gang. I hoppe it is good. But knowing KGeneral Amy Carter it will be mind blowing.
And yes Sarah and Chuckie needs to talk with MAx about the Shadow Group and see if they can get Sarah's boss on board. Beleive it is time for Max and Nick to meet up also through Rick.
Bring on the bigger and madder spiders and more powerful flyers. War is coming.

If you come back to this site every once in awhile he will tell you when the next chapter is up. When he tells us I usually read the chapter first before I see what the rest of the gang say about it.
Also he has two stories he is working on and one on the shelf. Read Northstar and coming home. You will like them. Also angeldust has written some good ones on this site. Also Bigman7303 has some good ones too on this site.

Hope that the little monkey or your girls do not see this see this one. If they do they might have fun making you gray and bald then slowing driving you insane.

Bring on the school board, PTA and courts. Let loose the army of Amy and her tiny little (ha ha) spiders.

again amazing chapter.. can't wait to read what doom will fall upon Kara and gang.. and what the girls will do to her ... especially Amy .
I was thinking it'd be nice to have a baby who will call Amy and Alice momma .nearly all Max's girls are called mommy by the kids .but only they are called aunts... that can be adopted baby or a biological one with Max.. can we have that in the next book? and I'm also eagerly waiting for the stories when baby Cynthia will learn to talk.. can there be a romantic sequence between Max and Marge in the next story. I really miss them thanks for the new chapter.. happy writing..

Thanks for that chapter. No major cliffhangers. But is this a lead in for things to come??
. Legion was very protective of these people, his hosts, his wards and they would find out just how protective, and just what he and the nanites were capable of and willing to do to protect this family; it would be some time before that revelation would come to light however.
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